NCIS fic: Let's Do the Show Right. Here!, DiNozzo/McGee, PG-13

Aug 23, 2009 14:49

Wow, so apparently I haven't written anything since June, omg. And now here I am posting when LJ/Dreamwidth are so quiet you can almost see the tumbleweeds. My life is a series of bizarre choices.

Anyway. Enough worry-warting from me. Thank you to my darling
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2009: fanfic, probilicious, tv: ncis

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catwalksalone August 24 2009, 10:38:09 UTC
It's not going anywhere! *waits patiently*

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ladyflowdi August 23 2009, 14:30:24 UTC
Hee!!!

.....HEEEE.

::flail hands:: I knew I'd gotten up early today for a reason, I just didn't know what. Apparently, the Tim/Tony NCIS fanfic gods were demanding I wake and partake of this bit of fluffy fluff glee. And oh, how gleeful it was. I love the bits about Tony blurting out his love, and and and the picture on the plasma, and the boys being boyish and flaily and boys. I love this to bits and pieces.

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catwalksalone August 24 2009, 10:39:34 UTC
Thank you! I'm delighted I could turn getting up early into a positive experience. :D

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soupytwist August 23 2009, 14:35:18 UTC
This makes me do flappy hands of flaily glee, and I actually do not care that it's basically marriage!fic, because it is DELIGHTFUL and OMG BOYSES. :D

Also hi, ILU. :D

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catwalksalone August 24 2009, 10:42:00 UTC
HI! I also, as it happens LU a whole damn lot.

Dude, I have now written kid!fic and marriage!fic in one year. What has become of me?
To be fair it only turned into marriage!fic at the very end--I didn't even know that was going to happen. But it totally worked from a symmetry perspective. Yay boys getting gay-engaged! Hee.

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sarka September 3 2009, 18:35:45 UTC
... *blinkblinkblink*

How was I not aware that the fandom that has eaten my brains for the past two weeks has a Katie? *waves at you*

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schtroumph_c August 23 2009, 17:26:36 UTC
Heeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! I have to rush out, I'll add more words later, but heeeeeeeeee!!!!

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schtroumph_c August 23 2009, 20:53:16 UTC
Ok, had to re read it first.

And OMG how much I love this? Like this {---------------------------------------------------} big. At least.

Tony trying to resist the puppy eyes and wanting to let the world knows! And wanting commitment! Tony and commitment! In the same phrase, without running away! And just being in love! And poor McGee scared of being separated.

The banter is so lovely and funny!

But how to dispose of Mr. Palmer?"

"Sharp scalpel and a body bag?"

"He'll take over the galaxy."

"Then I'll always get the best tables at restaurants. I don't see the bad."

"He'll cut off your hand."

"Ducky'll sew it back on."

"I have a gun," says Gibbs

"Your mom's an idiot." McGee returns the headslap.

"My mom's dead," Tony volleys with headslap number two.

"So's your face." Thirty all.

"But-"

"Shh!"

"It was-"

"Shh!"

They shh. Not that they're scared of Ziva or anything,So orange, heh. I guess you found the commentaries *grin ( ... )

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catwalksalone August 24 2009, 10:47:52 UTC
Yay, I'm so pleased you liked it!

Tony and commitment! In the same phrase, without running away!

I know! I suppose we might as well be grateful to Jeanne for something. Heh.

I'm all bouncy that you quoted the disposing of Mr Palmer exchange because I love it unreasonably.

So orange, heh. I guess you found the commentaries *grin* ?

Hee, yes. Though it hadn't escaped my attention already. I even had a discussion with one of my friends about writing a fic where something happens and the team all DO turn orange and Tony's the only one that notices something wrong. :D

Of course Abby would be the first in the know

In my head when Tim was up in the middle of the night (thinking, not writing, obvs) he ended up calling Abby and telling her everything. So she was in on the plan from the start.

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obvious_wing August 23 2009, 17:56:37 UTC
Love it, as usual! They're so damn cute, I can't even stand it. And the way McGee finally outed them, was so perfect. You're characterizations were spot on, and just, yay!

And I copy-pasted all my favorite lines, but there were a lot, so I had to narrow it down, haha

Do not think about thinking about doing it. Stop it! You're thinking about it right now, don't think you have me fooled, you arrest-for-indecent-public-behavior-just-waiting-to-happen, I am you ( ... )

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catwalksalone August 24 2009, 10:53:40 UTC
*beams* I love to see what works for people because just because I giggle when I write it doesn't mean other people will too, so thank you for sharing. :D

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