Fic: Breaking Up

Jun 09, 2009 23:38

Title: Breaking Up
Author: Catslove17
Fandom: Boys Over Flowers
Pairing: Ga Eul/Yi Jung (Kim Bum/So Eun)
Genre: Realism
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1328
Disclaimer: Just toying around with two interesting characters not of my own making on a whim
Summary: If there's only one perfect person out there, then who's out there for Ga Eul?
Author's Notes: A ( Read more... )

kdrama, pair: ga eul/yi jung, char: ga eul, boys over flowers, fanfiction, birthday shout out, char: yi jung

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YOU LIAR. naivelittleme June 9 2009, 15:33:55 UTC
You're still, and always will be, great♥

I liked the what if thing; I love what-if. I base my fandom on what-if xD

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Re: YOU LIAR. catslove17 June 21 2009, 15:23:21 UTC
Thanks for reading, as always.

I like what if's too! I'd love to explore the butterfly theory, you know? Or visit me in an alternate time line. Time is so interesting, eh?

It's sad our fandom is based on such guess work. I mean why must we live like this?

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I turn around, and there you are. Holding out your ever present hand. catslove17 June 21 2009, 15:27:06 UTC
Haha. I really liked [i]kind of like a dream you can't really remember but try desperately to[/i] when I wrote it, so I'm glad you picked up on that too. I find a lot of my life is my own neurotic observations. If you've ever seen Seinfeld, it's like one of those episodes. You end up discussing all these little social contract issues (what to do when friend's overstay their welcome, break up calls, office romances etc etc) and just everyday things. Reality is a huge kicker for me.

BOF is alright. But it's a strange/store point in our conversations isn't it?

Regardless, I'm glad you like my last paragraph, because I thought it was a tad rushed and ........ they all lived happily ever after. Thank you for the reassurance, and love. Always.

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aabass89 June 13 2009, 05:34:42 UTC
I was ready to tear my hair and said : it supposed to be my birthday present and you're breaking my heart!!!!!!!!!!! but the last paragraph save me from killing my self.

I LOVE YOU!!!!
I'm speechless. that was just. so. beautiful.
the poetry, the prose. one thing I can tell for sure. your writing has gotten so effing great!!!
just. no words.

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catslove17 June 21 2009, 15:28:50 UTC
As long as you like it, even just a little bit, then everything's alright. I wanted to impress you here.

I'm so glad you've noticed an improvement!! It's definitely what I'm aiming for in my writing. It's really all I can hope for.

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사랑해요... ^^ plum_blossoms June 18 2009, 04:49:07 UTC
Ah~ This was so well written! I didn't want to read this at first because of spoilers (since I haven't seen the Korean version of HYD LOL) but I love your writing and I haven't read a story from you in a while.

I can't believe she would break off a 6 and a half year relationship :O But I liked the ending when he told her he wouldn't give up on her ♥

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Re: 사랑해요... ^^ catslove17 June 21 2009, 15:33:43 UTC
No worries, take your time always. Thought I must tell you I don't know what the title of this reply means. You show off! Just because you're really bilingual : P

I still have to write something for missiemae, but yeah, the bunnies have been slow lately. Or for other fandoms (but I haven't written up anything for them either). You just get sidetracked from the main ship too a lot. I mean Yamaki who? You know? Plus school is always a bitch ( ... )

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Re: 사랑해요... ^^ plum_blossoms June 24 2009, 21:35:44 UTC
It means I love you, lol I wanted to write something random and that was easiest to remember XD Yep...I'm still on my Yamaki hiatus of sorts... I'm in my "Korean drama" phase and not listening to music or reading much fanfiction that much haha. I have random phases that go on for a couple months ^^ Hm...I think on Soompi the fans like to call themselves or the GaEul + YiJung shipping: Soeulmates? Something like that...I don't really remember haha.

I can't wait to read more stories from ya~ ♥

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Breaking up is the hardest step in a relationship...so they say... xcry June 18 2009, 15:52:07 UTC
Wow, I'm speechless. This was very, dramatic. I find it kind of heartbreaking that they broke up and then Yi Jang (God how many ways is there to spell this guy's name>) having and alcoholic problem. So typical of him.

But I love the ending because he's still pursuing Ga Eul. Oh so determined.

My favorite part has got to be...

You watch him walk away, you don’t know what to feel, can’t remember how, but you’re heart is beating at 100 miles per hour and you’ve found the piece that you were missing all along.

That paragraph speaks for itself. Ah missing pieces in a life, someone's a puzzle piece.

<3 Aabass89 is lucky to have this fic written for her. =D

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Re: Breaking up is the hardest step in a relationship...so they say... catslove17 June 21 2009, 15:37:05 UTC
Those damn koreans. Yeah. So many different ways.

HAHA! So very typical indeed. Those rich boys and their hobbies.

I don't really believe in true love, but if it doesn't exist in prose then we haven't got a hope in hell right?

Thank you so much for reading! I'm proud I've rendered you speechless : P.

I love you! Thanks for sticking with me, grammar mistakes be damned.

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