Comments | catslove17: Merry Christmas, Here comes santa with his bag is dysfunctional fics.

catslove17

Merry Christmas, Here comes santa with his bag is dysfunctional fics.

Dec 25, 2008 18:12

Merry Christmas all! I come with crappy fics for people who asked. I found it really difficult writing these this time, and so they're really not my best work. Especially the one I wrote for xcry it is just so unbelievable shit. In fact it's not even a fic. I'll explain more later.

Title: Nothing but the lies you've left me with
Author: Catslove17
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pair: erika t/ryo, char: erika t, char: ryo, char: tegoshi, japanese popular culture, fanfiction, pair: ryo/tegoshi, slash

Comments 21

naivelittleme December 25 2008, 21:43:45 UTC

Ohhh, I loved the Tegoshi/Ryo one! I get the feeling that although it took him a while, Tegoshi's going through the "adult puberty" ( which I believe Pi's going through all the time, and he'll probably never get out of it unless he realizes something about a special someone - yeah, I'm sort of biased xD ). Anyway, you know what i think of your fics♥

Chances of Pi growing up = .11192% catslove17 December 26 2008, 03:14:18 UTC

Thanks, when I was writing the Ryotego, I had the idea that I would make Tegoshi depressed, because at the time my life was quite terbulant, but I'm glad that my writing makes it able for people to read different things into it, that I'm not just telling one story.

The other "fic" was just all over the place ^^;;

It means a lot to me that you like my fics, and I would love the chance to read you work.

Re: Chances of Pi growing up = .11192% aabass89 December 26 2008, 08:04:59 UTC

eh? I think it is interesting. -Ryo/Erika, that is. I'd like to read the rest, see where the intro take you.
I don't think it's all over the place. you can see the thread of ideas. it would be nice to read until the story finished.

Re: Chances of Pi growing up = .11192% catslove17 December 26 2008, 14:05:56 UTC

I'm not going to finish it, like ever. memories better left untouched.

If Ryo was my bodyguard, I'd pretend to be so scared, that I'll make him sleep in bed with me... xcry December 26 2008, 05:32:06 UTC

...To protect me from the bed bugs.

AND SWEETHEART, THIS WAS NOT CRAP. I totally love the storyline. I loved how Ryo kinda despises her arrogant ass. And then when he leaves, Erika misses him. Kinda like your tragic love story. Hate becomes love, love becomes eternity. I'd totally want a drama version of that. Or you know...kinda like Backstage prince. I'd like to see that to, but that's besides the point and really, it's bout your awesome story.

Best line ever? Yes, despite everything I’d said, despite my best preparations to avoid the look of awe on my face I had on right now, that day I’d fallen just a little bit under her spell.

I'd fallen in love with her already, biyotch or not.

Anyway, thank you soooooo much for this fic. You worked so hard on it, and I really really love it, to bits, because there isn't enough of this OTP, RyoToda. I loves you, and I loves what you write, even if you say it's crap (which I know it isn't and will never be crap).

<3333333333333

aabass89 December 26 2008, 08:06:59 UTC

does it mean I can expect some RyoToda from you?
yes/yes?

Re: If Ryo was my bodyguard, I'd pretend to be so scared, that I'll make him sleep in bed with me... catslove17 December 26 2008, 14:05:08 UTC

If my second attempt goes better than my third. And maybe not even then, though I will try.

Re: If Ryo was my bodyguard, I'd pretend to be so scared, that I'll make him sleep in bed with me... catslove17 December 26 2008, 14:04:06 UTC

You're too nice and I don't deserve you, and that's final.

My god, my heart bursts for you, and your trying to make me feel better. Lets move to Canada and get married ohkay?

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catslove17 December 26 2008, 07:59:47 UTC

If you're online why didn't you talk to me on msn : (

mariegina December 29 2008, 16:23:13 UTC

OH CAT. YOU'RE MAKING ME WISH I DIDN'T HAVE TO GO TO WORK SO I CAN MAKE YOU CHURN OUT MORE FICS FOR MEEEEEEEEEEE T.T TEGOSHIIII

... *staying composed*
...that was beautiful. the way you described tego's depression and the way ryo reacted. i especially love the last line when ryo finally realizes that his tegoshi had been gone a long time ago, when he finally gives up. and it's funny how i think tegoshi is like this in real life T.T

catslove17 December 30 2008, 08:18:44 UTC

Thanks a lot, it means so much that you've commented. I'm actually quite fond of my slashy piece, though it was in the same style it's always in. I promise to "get out more".

I love the theme of giving up. It's right up there with waiting and rain, and I'm glad that you've liked the way I've explored it.

Looking forward for good times ahead,

< 3

mariegina December 30 2008, 15:58:43 UTC

I always comment, but my comments are lame xP GOOOD!

haha, yeah, giving up is an interesting topic.

Happy New Year Cat!

trivialaffair December 29 2008, 18:20:11 UTC

ooooooooooooooooh these were both lovely XD

The beginning of a beautiful friendship catslove17 December 30 2008, 08:20:47 UTC

Thanks a lot! I get this really tingly feeling when someone who isn't directly connected to me comments, because I know that it's definitely not out of obligation.

And thanks for even bothering to look at the second one.

I hope I can write more things that you'll enjoy in future, and nice meeting you!

Re: The beginning of a beautiful friendship trivialaffair December 30 2008, 18:45:09 UTC

I was linked to this by mariegina so yes, not out of obligation, and if it weren't for the rec, I wouldn't have known.

Actually, I was more interested in the second one than the first. Mariegina hates me for this, but I don't do Tegoshi as well as...pretty much everyone else in JE. I swear it's not that I hate him or anything but...yeah, I'm weird like that.

So yeah, the second one made me happy because no one writes them EVER :D

I'm sure you will and nice meeting you too!