March Challenge from the Ranch

Mar 02, 2010 06:58

Ok we've all seen the challenge from Ty himself... Kinda of weird if you think about it. Is that how he sees himself? Did he really go and fight in the war after marrying Lou? God, I hope not. But anyway as soon as I read it, the bunnies hopped! So hear it is. Thanks to wendymypooh for the awesome Beta!

WARNING: Beloved Character Death )

2010 nomination, challenges, the young riders, golden onions

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lalaith_paola March 2 2010, 16:24:54 UTC
This story is very sad, but in a way also romantic because it shows that they love each other so much that they can't be apart.

The last scene with Kid making the Russian roulette is very poignant, good job!

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queenmidalah March 2 2010, 17:15:15 UTC
Gah... *sniff*

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mercy2908 March 2 2010, 21:43:01 UTC
So sad!!! But it's beautifully written. Thank you

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wendymypooh March 3 2010, 00:05:10 UTC
A heart-wrenching story. These characters have become so ingrained with me..that they are like members of my family, and trying to beta this without falling apart was hard to do.

wonderful job.

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darkshornet March 3 2010, 01:58:36 UTC
I agree with the Paola, the russian roulette is a powerful scene.
It is a very sad story and I had to wonder why he thought this was a great idea. However you have a great job writing it.

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