Ficlet - All The Things That I've Done (FOP - Gen - Ten, Donna)

Apr 13, 2008 09:01

AUTHOR: sensiblecat

CHARACTERS: Ten and Donna

SPOILERS: The Fires of Pompeii

A moment illuminated, another impossible choice. And the touch of a human hand.

Another head aches, another heart breaks
I am so much older than I can take
Help me out…
I got soul but I’m not a soldier

The Killers

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torn_eledhwen April 13 2008, 08:42:38 UTC
Gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous - love the description.

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catsfiction April 15 2008, 19:15:25 UTC
Thank you very much!

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tempertemper April 13 2008, 10:39:10 UTC
Loved this! Beautifully written.

In his depths, he thinks he hears the cracking of a carapace, the splintering of stone.

Beautiful tie-in to the ep :)

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catsfiction April 15 2008, 19:15:10 UTC
Thanks - I worked hard on that bit!

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space_oddity_75 April 13 2008, 11:13:00 UTC
This was marvellous!

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catsfiction April 15 2008, 19:14:45 UTC
Thank you. Quite a few people tried that scene so I'm glad you liked my take on it. I'd written it within an hour of the show finishing, just something I needed to get out.

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jackaholic April 13 2008, 12:06:14 UTC
This is so so beautiful ♥

"He only knows that the world divides into those who’ll place their hand on top of his without a word and those who can’t. Or won’t."

I love that line. It sums up the entire series in just a few words. The whole thing is gorgeous though. I loved it :)

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catsfiction April 15 2008, 19:14:03 UTC
Oh thank you! What a lovely comment.

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earlgreytea68 April 13 2008, 14:08:54 UTC
"He only knows that the world divides into those who’ll place their hand on top of his without a word and those who can’t. Or won’t."

Yes. And oh, how desperately he needs those in the first category.

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catsfiction April 15 2008, 19:13:45 UTC
Word to that.

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