Drabble - Devotion

[cats_meeeow]

Title: Devotion

Comments

[just_ann_now]

Even though it's a lush, romantic scene, I love your use of action words: map, writhe, tangle, flutter, surge, pulse. It's quite unexpected, and lends a wonderful sense of energy and passion.

[cats_meeeow]

I'm so glad that the passion came through. That's what I was trying for...Thanks for making my day!