Fic: Why Do You Let Me Stay Here?

Nov 03, 2010 22:05

Title: Why Do You Let Me Stay Here
Rating: G
Pairing: Mostly gen, Ariadne/Arthur at the end
Word Count: 1275
Summary: A fill for this prompt:

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I need this bank robber to be Arthur, somehow, plz. Make it work, anon.

Originally posted under the prompt, now expanded! Summary: Arthur dances like a fiend.

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ryuugazaki November 4 2010, 05:28:46 UTC
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD

YES

You weaved the situation in so seamlessly and added a wonderful touch as the epilogue. The way you characterized everyone there was especially spot-on, as if this was just an outtake from the movie!

I won't be able to watch that video from now on without thinking of this fic now (And it's a good thing).

P.S. I also love you, prompt creator.

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catremistrae November 4 2010, 05:41:58 UTC
Blinky text! I feel special. Thanks for the review!

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elliesmeow November 4 2010, 05:35:22 UTC
This was too damned cute! Thanks for posting.LOL

-Ellie

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catremistrae November 4 2010, 05:42:13 UTC
Thanks for reviewing!

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joannacullen November 4 2010, 05:37:33 UTC
Um...A+++++++

Not only did you introduce me to that awesome video, you totally made this a believable story - and A/A so that's always a plus (even as much as I may love Zooey). :D

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catremistrae November 4 2010, 05:42:51 UTC
I have to thank the prompt creator for introducing me to it. Thanks for reviewing!

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sandie_eggo November 4 2010, 06:08:48 UTC
OMG, that was so much awesome.

Great job! :)

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catremistrae November 4 2010, 06:18:12 UTC
Thank you!

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nugacity November 4 2010, 08:04:29 UTC
My love for this makes me dizzy. Yay for dancing Arthur! And Ari putting the coffee stirrer in my mouth makes me smile. Sweet detail.

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