Excerpt from Phat Fairy (still very rough)

[catrambo]

(somewhere towards the late middle)

The sun rose, filtering through the (towering) cedars all around me, and the air was full of green smells. The wind rustled with a predatory beat in the underbrush. Sunlight edged the mountains. In the empty space where two dipped to meet, a fist-sized blaze illuminated the further pines.
I pushed forward to kneel

Comments

[spencimusprime]

I like this, Car. Even when it's a tiny piece of your mosaic style of writing (which fascinates the hell out of me since I can only write linear) it's very beautiful, and the stakes (a dead girl) are up already.

Write faster.

[spencimusprime]

Did I just call you Car? wtf.

[catrambo]

Vroom, vroom!

[anonymous]

Long time lurker, first time poster. I just wanted to say this is lovely, and I can't wait to read more!

--A.C. Wise