Family of Secrets - Part 4

[catjahatter]

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So, this is Part 4... :) What do you think? I think there might be 1 more part after this, which still needs to be written. But... Here's Part 4... Hope you enjoyed it all so far.

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“What the hell?!” The man got to his feet as she stumbled backwards, her eyes wide in pain and fear, her mouth managing a few silent gasps. “What did you

Comments

[echo_fangirl]

Well that's certainly a very dramatic way to find out that particular secret!

I certainly hope everyone gets where they need to be in time. I'm going to be very disgruntled if any of the extended Lester family doesn't make it!

[catjahatter]

Yeah, it sure is... :D Hehe.

Well, even I don't know yet... so... :)

Thanks. :)

[catjahatter]

There's some more drama in Part 5... :)

And, there'll be one more part after this one and the suspense and tension will be over. :) Hehe.

http://catjahatter.livejournal.com/6358.html

[prehistoriccat]

Loving this! Poor confused Connor but yay for him punching Lester LOL very satisfying!

Can't wait for more!

[catjahatter]

Yeah, I thought Connor could get some of his anger out on his secret father... Mwahaha... :)

Will let you know when Part 5 is up. :)

Thanks. :D

[catjahatter]

Just to let you know Part 5 is up now and Connor gets a hell of a lot more confused... :D

http://catjahatter.livejournal.com/6358.html

[tay_21]

You still have to write the next part??? That sucks. This was a fantastic chapter. Probably you're best one yet. Another evil cliffhanger though. Can't wait for you to get the next part up. Please hurry.

[catjahatter]

I know, it does suck, I love writing it, though, so will either post it today or tomorrow. :)

Mwahaha. :) Thank you very much. And I will try and hurry. :D

Thanks. :)

[catjahatter]

Hey. :) Just thought I'd let you know that part 5 is up... And there's just the one more part after part 5, so there's another evil cliffhanger, m'afraid. :)

http://catjahatter.livejournal.com/6358.html

[tay_21]

Thanks for letting me know. You're stuff is amazing BTW. I am rally enjoying it.

[rusty_armour]

Holy suspense, Batman! I was on the edge of my seat for the whole part! :-) I agree with echo_fangirl that receiving that phone call from Amy was a very dramatic way for Connor to learn the big secret! Very nicely done! The scene with the punch up was even more exciting! As this is so out of character for Connor, I can see why Lester was too shocked to defend himself. However, I can also understand why Connor would be so angry and upset.

Oh, man! I hope they find Amy in time! Poor Amy, Lester and Connor!

[catjahatter]

Hehe. :) It was a very dramatic way, agreed, but it had you on the edge of your seat so it worked. :) Hehe. :D

Ooh, yes, the punch. Mwahaha. :)

Ah, well, I guess you'll have to wait and see... :)

Thanks. :D

[catjahatter]

Hello. :) Just letting you know that Part 5 is up, and then there'll be just the one more part after it. :)

Hope you enjoy it.

http://catjahatter.livejournal.com/6358.html

[deinonychus_1]

meep! This is great, really exciting. Poor Connor, and now they're shutting him out at the time when he really needs to be out there helping.