A Family of Secrets.

May 24, 2010 21:35



Title: A Family of Secrets.
Author: catjahatter
Rating: 14 - Swearing.
Characters/Pairing: Connor/Abby (established, yet secret, relationship.) James Lester. Amelia Lester. Sarah. Danny.
Spoiler: No spoilers.
Warning: Swearing.
Genre: Action.

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“You can’t tell him, Amy.” Her brother was stepping into the argument now, hiding behind her ( Read more... )

character:amelia, character: lester, character: abby, primeval, character: connor, genre: action/adventure, character: danny, character: sarah

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tay_21 May 26 2010, 14:00:13 UTC
This has a really cool premise. Were you going to write more? I want to know the rest of the story.

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catjahatter May 26 2010, 14:57:23 UTC
Thank you. :') Yeah, I've got this whole story line in my head. :) I've written Chapter 2 already and am going to start Chapter 3 soon.

Just wanted to know what people thought of it.

I'll post them soon. :D

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tay_21 May 26 2010, 16:01:53 UTC
Cool, I look forward to reading it then.

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catjahatter May 26 2010, 17:26:13 UTC
Thank you. :)

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rusty_armour May 26 2010, 17:00:25 UTC
What an interesting story! I agree with tay_21 about it being a really cool premise! And I second her request to read more, so I'm happy you've finished Chapter 2! :-)

I'm really curious to know how Lester met Connor's mother. He must have been really young at the time. It's great that Amelia had already started forming a bond with Connor before she knew that he was her brother. That talk they had about bullies was really sweet. It's nice that Connor is already looking out for his little sister.

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catjahatter May 26 2010, 17:30:19 UTC
Thank you very much-ly. :) I will put it up later on today but not post it onto the community until tomorrow - as if I post twice in one day it counts as spamming, does it not? :S

Ah, there'll be a flashback later on in the story... so all will be revealed. :D Yeah, Connor looks out for everyone but himself... >.<

I'll let you know when it's up...

And thanks again for reading and commenting. :)

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rusty_armour May 26 2010, 19:20:49 UTC
It's great that all will be revealed in a flashback later on in the story! I'll look forward to that -- as I'll look forward to another chapter! :-)

I hate to say it, but I may not be back online again until Thursday night. However, I'll be sure to read what you've posted then. :-)

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catjahatter May 26 2010, 19:28:47 UTC
Aw, thanks. :)

Okay-dokey, that's now problem. :D I'm just pleased that people read this first chapter let alone you want to read more. :D

I will still let you know, though... XD

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prehistoriccat May 26 2010, 19:54:44 UTC
Great start! Looking forward to more!

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catjahatter May 26 2010, 20:07:14 UTC
Thank you very much. :D It'll be up soon... :)

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

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deinonychus_1 May 26 2010, 19:56:23 UTC
ooh, interesting idea. I have a horrible suspicion it's not going to be pretty if Connor ever does find out about who Lester is.

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catjahatter May 26 2010, 20:08:55 UTC
Yeah... It's not pretty before Connor finds out. (If he finds out...) Mwahahaha. :')

Thank you for reading and commenting. :D

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echo_fangirl May 28 2010, 00:28:49 UTC
Ooh, great idea! Can't wait to see how this all pans out!

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catjahatter May 28 2010, 07:50:19 UTC
Thank you very much. :)

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