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Fic: A Quiet Murmuration

Nov 11, 2011 15:07

Title: A Quiet Murmuration
Author: cathedral carver
Pairing: John/Sherlock
Rating: T
Word count: 4,600
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me.

Summary: Just pay me back with one thousand kisses.

Written for this prompt at the Kink Meme.

( are you keeping count? )

sherlock, fanfiction

Comments 160

marysutherland November 11 2011, 22:14:57 UTC

Very clever, how you vary the repetitions, and show them coming closer to one another and then pulling away. And I loved Sherlock being happy with the starlings, and, for entirely different reasons, the ear phone case.

cathedralcarver November 14 2011, 16:26:37 UTC

:D Ah, thank you so very much. I know everyone saw the murmuration video that was making the rounds, and I immediately thought of Sherlock. And the ear phone case! Yay! Think I might buy one, too :D Thank you <3

shefa November 11 2011, 22:16:06 UTC

*giant grin

I adore the thought of Sherlock dropping kisses on John unexpectedly and in unexpected places. What a lovely way to show the relationship evolving and to make it evolve, really. *happy sigh

I have a feeling there are going to be loads of 'accidents' needing restitution, back and forth and back and forth. Ahem.

Until they both admit they don't need any of that to keep on kissing. :D

Gorgeous work.

cathedralcarver November 14 2011, 16:27:52 UTC

Hello, you! Can I pay money to have this played out on the TV screen???? CAN YOU IMAGINE???? Oh my, the Kink Meme and its lovely prompts. I had fun with this one, and I have a "thing" for kissing. Glad you liked sweetie-pie <3

uwsannajane November 11 2011, 22:32:30 UTC

So many adjectives I could use! All of them enthusiastic. I think I'll go with "enchanting." Just too much fun to read <3

cathedralcarver November 14 2011, 16:28:13 UTC

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'll take enchanting...thank you! <3

veronamay November 11 2011, 22:53:46 UTC

So many kisses! This is very lovely and the perfect way to begin my Saturday. Thank you!

cathedralcarver November 14 2011, 16:28:42 UTC

So VERY many kisses. Can you imagine? God, I'd love to see that. Thank you so much!

tropes November 11 2011, 22:54:48 UTC

Gorgeous!!! I love it.

Tangentially, darn! I saw a viral video of a murmuration two days ago and made notes to work it into a fic somehow. You beat me to it! ♥

cathedralcarver November 14 2011, 16:29:28 UTC

Oh, I'm sorry :( YOU CAN STILL DO IT, THOUGH. DO IT. DOOOOOOOO IT. It's just something I immediately thought Sherlock would love. Thank you for the lovely review <3