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Title: Blood On Blonde
Author: little arsonist
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: smut_queen's one! I liked it.
Spoilers: season four, to be safe.
Disclaimer: not mine, don't sue.
Word Count: 436 (eek. Iwon't go over the limit ever again!)
Notes: I don't think this is quite finished. I had to get everything I have down before it escaped. There may or may not be more

Comments

[salpal]

Woman! You can't just leave it there! Good God!

:D

This is so awesome. That last bit just killed me.

[lewis771750]

I agree. I want to know what happens next, but also what happened to get Catherine covered in that much blood.

Please?

[juliesgirl]

continue continue.. how did she get so much blood, what happens next?

[sarapallas]

You're focused on how much blood she's wearing.

Lovely.

[lewis771750]

I am a nasty person. I blame all those vampire stories, being covered in blood gives extra eroticism in some circumstances. Catherine covered in fluids, including blood, water in the shower etc. all nudge my blood pressure somehow. I might also be a sick person.

I am also not only focussed on how much blood she's wearing, but would like to know how she came to be wearing it. It might not be a clear compliment but it was meant as one - the eroticism of the moment is high and good, but the story is also present and interesting. At least to me anyway.

[sarapallas]

I wasn't going for the eroticism, myself. Just the combination of words. It was phrased well.

[lewis771750]

It was phrased well.

But I have to ask, the prospect of Catherine inviting you to get in the shower with her and asking you to Help me feel something, doesn't that seem at all erotic?

[etienne]

I love it!

More, please! :)

[nursedianaklim]

Fabulously written. Please continue! :D

[triniliyah]

OMG...so so beautifully well written...i love it..."I've never felt this numb...Help me feel something." just wow! i love it!