Comments | catchmysnitch: Another new applicant!

flyingcarpet in catchmysnitch

Another new applicant!

Mar 18, 2008 21:51

Our second new applicant in a week! As usual, only members can vote in the poll, but I know our author would love to hear from everyone.

Title: A Brotherly Nudge In The Right Direction.
Author: potterholic87Characters: Harry/Ginny, Ron ( Read more... )

challenge:snitch, challenge:broom, mod post, membership vote, author:kentish_queen

Comments 6

lyras March 19 2008, 02:32:24 UTC

I really liked this! The characterisation and set-up were excellent, and the story held my interest right to the end.

My only criticism would be that I noticed a couple of typos and confusion of your/you're towards the end. Nothing that another read-through or beta-read wouldn't fix, though.

I think this is a lovely piece :).

ginny88 March 19 2008, 05:17:07 UTC

An engaging story to read, just the right amount of angst and fluff. The typos are minimal.

magglenagall March 21 2008, 02:25:38 UTC

Unfortunately, I couldn't get past the typos, grammar and punctuation mistakes, and homophone mix-ups (not to mention that "incrudiously" isn't even a word) to appreciate the content. I'm not a member of the community, but if I were my vote would have to be No.

lunalovepotter March 23 2008, 03:39:48 UTC

This is very sweet, and I enjoyed it a lot. Typos are a minor distraction, but not so much that it took away from the overall storyline. Good work. :)

flyingcarpet March 26 2008, 03:06:55 UTC

I have to disagree with the other reviewers who said that the typos, word misuse, grammar and punctuation errors here were "minor." To me they were a major distraction and a definite indication that the author just does not care enough to create a quality piece for this community. It reads as though it were dashed off in the middle of math class.

If the decision were up to me alone, I would tell you to get three or four tough, smart beta-readers and put in some hard work on your mechanics before coming back.