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Quiddtich Rules Apply (Challenge Fic: Snitch)

Sep 29, 2006 06:57

TITLE: Quidditch Rules Apply

RATING: NC-17

SUMMARY: After a tough day, Harry and Ginny find that there’s nothing better than Quidditch to change the mood.

WORD COUNT:4,003
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author:stmargarets, challenge:snitch

Comments 90

ladytonks September 29 2006, 10:51:33 UTC

Fantastic and creative and HOT!!! You also managed to tug at the heart strings. His surprise that Ginny loved him enough to keep dinner warm was a nice touch.

Great Job!

stmargarets September 29 2006, 11:45:08 UTC

Oh, squee! My first review of my first NC-17 fic! Thanks for your kind words - esp. the word "hot." Fluff I can do, but I didn't know if I could do hot. *happy sigh* Of course, this is Ginny with Harry we're talking about -how could I go wrong? Thanks for reading!

snarkhunter September 29 2006, 14:45:43 UTC

Your icon KILLS me. I love it. *cackling*

buckbeakbabie September 29 2006, 11:17:29 UTC

Oh, wow, that was wonderful. So tender and perfect, and hot too! Harry was so adorable in this, I wanted to hug him when he asked if she was saving the stew for anyone. And Ginny trying to be calm and eat dinner with the snitch flying around. I loved all of it.

Well done!

stmargarets September 29 2006, 11:47:22 UTC

Thanks for reading! I don't know how you've been doing it - writing J/L smut - this was nerve-racking! I'm really appreciating the smut writers on my flist!

rdprice29 September 29 2006, 11:18:42 UTC

Harry glanced at the picture and then he stared at Ginny in amazement. “Who’s looking at that witch’s hair? And I am not going to discuss Hermione’s underwear.” He shuddered. “It’s just wrong.”

LOL! That was great, in fact, this entire story was great! I love the interaction between Harry and Ginny - very in character, I think, and very much in love.

Wonderful job!

stmargarets September 29 2006, 11:48:53 UTC

I'm glad their love showed through and they seemed in character. They're such great characters, I wouldn't want to mess them up! Thanks for reading! Love your icon, btw.

ladytory September 30 2006, 01:46:32 UTC

Umm I made that icon. ;)

stmargarets September 30 2006, 10:59:19 UTC

I love the art - but add some motion and - wow.

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bringandfly September 29 2006, 11:35:30 UTC

I'd leave a detailed review for you, St Mags,but the ability to arrange, erm, sentences creatively, and um, appreciatively, yeah-that's the word- has deserted me temporarily.

I shall have to read this again until I can review properly. ;-) (and again, and again...)

stmargarets September 29 2006, 11:49:56 UTC

LOL. You sweetie! Thanks for reading. At one point writing this, I thought I had lost the ability to string words together. (Not a good sign in the middle of a fic.)

daksian September 29 2006, 12:52:14 UTC

Very nicely done indeed! An excellent mix of romance and naughtiness. The narrative was arousing without being crude, and the use of the snitch was inspired. So often in NC-17 fics the addition of magic is confined to the 'Contraceptive Charm', which to me is a real shame, since magic can open all sorts of doors in imaginative eroticism, or, as you were able to show with Sabrina's Secrets catalogue and even in the main story with the 'Pants Charm', naughty humour. ;)

I loved it. Congratulations on writing such an excellent piece of work. :)

stmargarets September 29 2006, 13:05:35 UTC

Oh, I know! Magic and romance go so well together - just some Hovering Charms alone would make things interesting . . . erm. Did I just say that? LOL. I need to beat back the NC-17 plot bunnies and get back to my PG-13 story now! ;) Thanks for reading and letting me know what worked. This was a killer to write.