Comments | catalyst283: 100 Days, 100 Drabbles (#20: Late)

catalyst283

100 Days, 100 Drabbles (#20: Late)

Nov 04, 2007 21:38

Genre: Avatar: The Last Airbender
Title: 100 Days, 100 Drabbles
Chapter Title: Late (20/100)
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avatar, rain, aang, avatar:100days100drabbles, 100days100drabbles:day020, death

Comments 4

melodiee November 5 2007, 18:30:33 UTC

Hm, it seems like it should be "The water fell hard onto her skin, a sharp reminder..." because you haven't used an article yet, so using a definite article right away feels awkward.

catalyst283 November 6 2007, 02:38:40 UTC

Yea, I can see what you're saying...I dunno, I'm going to keep it that way, though; I'll change it if it bothers me later.

arthoniel November 7 2007, 02:33:42 UTC

Aww... that's so sad...

catalyst283 November 7 2007, 04:51:00 UTC

'Tis. D: I almost cried writing it. :'(