The Call (#1: Pretend)

[catalyst283]

Genre: The Chronicles of Narnia
Title: The Call
Chapter Title: Pretend (001/100)
Author: catalyst283 
Word count: 201
Rating: G
Warnings: angst, great sadness
Notes: I had just read some heart-wrenching Susan/Caspian fics when I thought of this. It came unexpected-and at the wrong time (I still have homework to finish…)-but it wouldn’t leave me alone until I wrote

Comments

[catalyst283]

I know! I feel so extremely bad for her...I just couldn't help trying to express her complicated feelings in a little drabble.

Thanks. :) I'll definitely keep writing--hopefully fluff next time~!

[kitoky]

Oh! Beautiful drabble piece! It's so sad and angsty, and Susan! [cries]

Great job for your first Narnia fic!

[catalyst283]

Thank you! :D

I know--there can never be enough tears for her situation. :(

But! One can always fix canon with fanfiction. :3 I intend to write AU drabbles later--fixing canon to give her a happy ending, of course!

[kitoky]

[squee] YAY HAPPY ENDINGS!! We have to stand up for our Susan!

[catalyst283]

YES! :D

[arthoniel]

Ooh, yay, you're back!! :D

And damn... I really want to give Susan a hug here. She needs one. Seriously.

[catalyst283]

Yep! :D I put the disclaimer that I won't be doing this for 100 days straight this time--just because of a lack of time--but in all actuality I kind of want to write every day. xD We'll see what happens...

She does. :(

She needs one in my next drabble, too. ^^;; The third drabble WILL be happy--it must be!

[queenluz]

I liked how that was written. Almost sounds like a poem.

[catalyst283]

Thanks! :D I pride myself on my smoothness in my writing--I'm such a perfectionist that a 200-300 word drabble takes at least an hour to write. xD

[kitoky]

I just wanted to say that your icon is made of more win than you will ever know.
<3

[rosegilmore]

Aww, great job!! Very beautiful!

[catalyst283]

Thanks. :)