Comments | catachrestical: fic // tvxq // our little princess #9

catachrestical

fic // tvxq // our little princess #9

Aug 18, 2007 01:24

Title: Our Little Princess
Author: catachrestical
Keywords: Bandfic; hints of JaeHo and YooSu; some original characters.
Rating: PG13 for few language mishaps.
Disclaimer: Do not own, did not happen.
Notes: The boys found themselves having to take care of two orphan kids.Kids. TVXQ. Attempts on crack/drama/fluff.

First version beta'd by janeberryblue; current version re- ( Read more... )

chaptered, #8, #5, tvxq, #3, olpverse, tvxq our little princess, #1, #2, #7, yoochun/junsu, yunho/jaejoong, #6, #4

Comments 63

uncertain_memor August 18 2007, 04:08:40 UTC

I really loved this chapter, though I was a little lost in the beginning bcause its been a while, I thought I had missed something.

Im really and loving the snarky-ness of yoochuns siter XD

catachrestical August 18 2007, 12:07:01 UTC

.... :D; yeah, that seems to be one of my many downfalls. I don't update often XD

Pandy is special, yes ♥ Thanks for reading!

orionsroad August 18 2007, 06:31:59 UTC

I like Chun's sister too with their silly nicknames and 'friendly' insults. :D I also like smart-cookie!Yunnie-sister, and Jae's mum!sister.

And the first part, with Yunho's stupidity about his health, and how they dealt with it was nice too. It wasn't overdramatic, but really got the tone across well, and how much they care for each other. ♥

catachrestical August 18 2007, 12:08:38 UTC

Your thoughtful review makes me happy. I can't tell you how much. Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

rainbowpebbles August 18 2007, 09:48:23 UTC

O.O yunho is mad. if it were me, i probably would have rolled over and died, ruining the carpet by spitting out blood. then jaejoong would come after me with 5 bottles of clorox XD XD XD

ahaha~ they have a plan!!! i like the way you involved all their family members in this- it gives it a very warm, family-ish feeling ^^

I SPOT YOOSU 8D been waiting for it ever since they started arguing about those whale noises ^____^ i love the way you write jaeho and yoosu!!! subtle yet sweet :D

loved this chapter very very mucho!!! update again soon!!! (: (: (: <333

7x18 August 18 2007, 11:04:39 UTC

*poke* update please... hehe.

rainbowpebbles August 18 2007, 14:22:55 UTC

HAHAHAHAHAHA :D i should get working on it now, shouldn't i? ^_~

catachrestical August 18 2007, 12:11:41 UTC

Ah, yes. That part was actually based on real fact. I think we can conclude that real!YunHo is crazy, too ;)

Warm and family-ish is the whole point of the fic. I'm glad you spotted on that ♥

And yes, this is why it says hints of JaeHo and YooSu XD I don't think I can still find my niche on writing an established relationship for them.

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥!

7x18 August 18 2007, 11:09:17 UTC

an update! an update!

gyah.... I'm actually running high since this morning since I saw your fic... and the JAEHO and YOOSU were absolute love. Am excited on how you'll be continuing this.

And including the smart sisters (woman power!) is ~_~

please update soon.

catachrestical August 18 2007, 12:12:18 UTC

XD I hope the continuation won't disappoint. As for now, thanks for reading and commenting ♥

crystaldee August 18 2007, 11:56:04 UTC

OMG!!! This is soooo exciting!!!!!!!
I can't wait for the next part!!!!

I love all their sisters....
Kakaakkakakaa... ^^

Btw, I found: "...Well. See, we wanted YunHo-hyung's parents to do it at first-because we're, you know, under-aged-but we didn't want to complicate things further since they've agreed on helping us with the settlements. Plus Umma and Appa are..." From JaeJoong's.

Jae calling Yunnie, Hyung?

catachrestical August 18 2007, 12:13:31 UTC

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omg you spotted it 8'D Yes, that was my mistake -goes to fix- Thank you ♥♥♥ And for reading and commenting, too!