Comments | cat_o_wen: KA Fic ~ A Lullaby for Cara (part two

cat_o_wen

KA Fic ~ A Lullaby for Cara (part two - conclusion)

Apr 21, 2009 23:06

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writing, king arthur, fanfic

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asco_310 April 22 2009, 13:18:27 UTC

I liked it! Although, perhaps I do not understand all :D Thank you!
Where can I find the first part?

asco_310 April 22 2009, 13:24:06 UTC

Excuse me! I found it! :D

cat_o_wen April 22 2009, 13:45:52 UTC

Thank you so much for reading this, dear! And glad you found the link for the first part. If there is anything in particular that you want to understand better, let me know and I will do my best to explain it. I know English is a very complicated language...so I would gladly help with the translation for you.

asco_310 April 22 2009, 15:03:25 UTC

Thanks so much!
My problem is that I can understand (or guess) the contents of the text. Nuances of the English language, unfortunately, remain inaccessible to me.
I very want to learn English, but until I can not find the time.

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blade_and_roses April 22 2009, 14:14:33 UTC

The contrast between Arthur and Lancelot and Cara is wonderful. All of them just slightly mis-interpreting things . . . with Lancelot closer to the truth than the others.

And more is coming? *does happy dance*

cat_o_wen April 22 2009, 14:29:33 UTC

Thank you so much!! Yes, ole Lance is a bit more in tune to women than poor Arthur *laughs*

I hope to turn Cara's story into a full length novel....if I can find a way to keep working on it. No doubt it will take me YEARS...but yes, more snatches from her tale are coming. Thanks so much for the support!!

suejc3dogs April 22 2009, 23:16:43 UTC

Lucky Cara. I wanna know what Lancelot did to the attacker!

cat_o_wen April 22 2009, 23:33:47 UTC

Tee Hee. *whistles* I'm not sure Lance will ever tell what he did to that bastard.

Thanks for the read, Sue!!

kushiels_lady April 23 2009, 15:03:45 UTC

Wow, this is bloody gorgeous, and I'm sooooo glad you wrote more *dribbles* You totally should continue this to full length novel, because it's brilliant. Your description is awe-inspiring, and you evoke some amazing emotions! Love it! x

cat_o_wen April 23 2009, 15:35:47 UTC

Thank you so much, honey!! *smooches* It will probably take me 10 years to do it, but I shall keep working on pulling her story together. You are one of my top inspirational writers too..so thanks so much for that!
xoxo

sasha_b April 24 2009, 01:30:44 UTC

He pursed his lips and cocked a single well kept brow at the girl. She was not unpleasant to look at.

Hehehehheeee. Silly L.

You know I love this and I'm so proud of you for continuing it. Every bit of this is genuine and I can see and feel everything easily - from Cara's misplaced fear to Arthur's stoic confusion. And the reasons behind the way Lancelot knows how to treat her vs. Arthur being so...well, Roman. ;)

Lovely work and I really do hope you keep it up. DO IT. *gg*

*hugs*

cat_o_wen April 24 2009, 02:49:04 UTC

Well I learned how to write L from you *winks*

You are my biggest supporter and I couldn't do it without your input either. So thank you for always being there for me. *smooches*

I'm glad the way I wrote her fears and the reactions of both men work....as you know, it can be a struggle to get that right.