An update on college and my first essay....

Feb 06, 2007 20:03

I finally received the results of my first essay.....she gave me a B! But apparently I have a lot of run-on sentences *laughs* She wouldn't let us keep the graded papers but is supposed to make us  copies...duh, that's the only way I'll learn from my mistakes. Oh and I got a 98 (A) on my second Algebra exam!  Go me! Now I only have to worry about ( Read more... )

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sasha_b February 7 2007, 02:30:27 UTC
I did tell you just how much I like that icon? Hee!

I wish I could give you a more coherent review of your essay - suffice it to say I like the way you integrated the personal feelings with descriptions of what diabetes can be like in terms of the medical meaning.

Dude, I dare not say any more for fear NOTHING I say will make sense. *laughs*

*smooches you back*

AN A IN ALGEBRA????? OUTSTANDING!

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cat_o_wen February 7 2007, 11:58:20 UTC
*smooches* Thanks muchly for the feedback. Perhaps I should make you beta my current essay *laughs*

And I laugh every time I see your 'cramping' icon too *giggles* I might need to make myself one of those with A. *gg*

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endiahna February 7 2007, 04:18:02 UTC
I think I understand Diabetes myself a little bit more. I tink this was a positive piece.

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cat_o_wen February 7 2007, 11:56:23 UTC
Oh great! That was my intentions with it for sure. Thanks for taking the time to read it.

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padabee February 7 2007, 06:21:45 UTC
*cheers in background*

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cat_o_wen February 7 2007, 11:55:45 UTC
*smooches* Thanks luv!

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