Fic

[cat_i_th_adage]

Osaka Joe and the Ladies of Darkness and Light

Comments

[stephanie_pegg]

It's good. Don't have much to say in comment, though, except - it's much darker than the CCS version of DARK, like in Sakura's case, it was light that was settled inside her, but in Osaka Joe's case it's black depression. It makes the overall story much bleaker.

Jonathon Lily?

[cat_i_th_adage]

Sorry it's so bleak. I think the pacing might be a little off near the end.

Would you like me to finish one thing?

(But appreciate your pestering.)

[stephanie_pegg]

"Would you like me to finish one thing?"
Yeah, but you're not finishing - you keep on starting new things.

Cerberous Dialogues???