Squee x 1000000000000000000000! A VERY compelling beginning indeed! Poor Connor to have his heart broken by Abby's words, but at least it spurred him into action, finally! He needed his eyes opened and the thought of losing her was enough to do it. I like how you integrated part of canon with him sneaking into Philip's private files. Question is, what will Connor do with his new found knowledge and how will his set things to right with Abby?
Well, he needed a wake-up call, yeah? LOL! Hee... that is the question. I think you'll be surprised with where I went with this, but I think you'll like it. :D Thanks very much!
Eeep! This was amazing! Thank you so much :) I felt so sad for our poor Connor when he found what Abby really thought! Meep. I hope Connor knows what he's doing for certain and can patch things up with Abby. I love the idea of the journal she keeps... This was really intruiging and I can't wait for the next chapters! :D
Oh, good! I'm glad you are enjoying it! Connor certainly is in a bad place right now, and I hope you like the direction I take it. I think you will. ;) Thanks!
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! It figures that having his nose rubbed in how he was about to lose Abby would get his attention! NOW CONNOR KNOWS! I can't wait to see what he does with the information... if he even gets out of the building...
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I'm very excited for more!
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