Captive (3/3)

[casusfere]

Title: Captive (3/3)
Rating: R
Warning: Torture, sadism, dismemberment, a certain Combaticon interrogator being off his leash
Characters: Vortex, First Aid
Universe: G1
Summary: Rescue comes, but are they too late?
Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Comments

[anavidbookworm]

Ratchet kicks butt! :) I was so scared as I approached the end of this fic that the Autobots would not be able to get to First Aid in time. But they did and I'm relieved. Now I'm rather curious how Aid will deal with the whole thing; especially what happens the next time he sees Vortex.

[casusfere]

Yay suspense! XD And yes, Ratchet kicks some serious aft. Never underestimate him or First Aid!

Oh shiny

[xianghua]

Glad to see a resolution to this! (But now I want to know what happens next! Poor First Aid!)

Re: Oh shiny

[casusfere]

What happens next? Let's see... In a nearby airbase, the radar technicians will be scowling at the little dots on the screen doing all sorts of things they aren't supposed to do. They write it off as "Them damn robots." Then they're going to take a break and get coffee, which will prompt complaints about the quality of the coffee and accusations that the cook is putting dirt in the machine instead of coffee grounds...

Oh! You mean to First Aid! X3 (I'm ornery before I get my caffeine, can you tell?)

Re: Oh shiny

[xianghua]

[ultharkitty]

Excellent end to this, very nicely written and with a damned good punch to it :D It isn't usual for me, but I was actually cheering Ratchet on at the end there... Although obviously Vortex escaping would be far more interesting than him being blown up.

Also, did I tell you recently how much I love how dark this is? :P

[casusfere]

Aw, Vortex has a Blast Off to squeal to! I'm sure he'll be fine (relatively), and get the slag beat out of him by Onslaught soon as he makes it back to base. Vortex will learn absolutely nothing from this, and will count it as a win, as he got away with a hand and two optics. Thinking about what he does with a dismembered hand disturbs me, so this is my brain shutting off. :P

[justnuts]

This fic had me feeling ill and wiggling with happiness at the same time throughout. It's a very confusing feeling! /laughs

I loved it! So dark and awesome! And even though I loved how horrifying and dark it was, I was very very happy by Ratchet saving the day at the end.

Thank you!

[spacehussy]

Shrieking with horror and enjoyment, so very much XDDDD I'm really relieved he was rescued, spirit unbroken (and Vortex not being "done with him" is so fascinatingly creepy), it makes it easier to enjoy how twisted everything was too that point. My skin is positively crawling and yet D: *DRAWS HEARTS* <3333