This is great! I'm standing at one of those public computer terminals in the airport in Singapore. They don't let you sit down because you're not supposed to hog the connection, and you get automatically logged off every 15 minutes. I've been re-logging on here for a while, reading this story from prologue to finish. You've made my day, Margaret!
Like Dorian, I'm a little flabbergasted that Klaus basically confessed without actually confessing, but I'm glad he didn't give up on him. Lovely story!
That was a great story! If you think about it, it totally fits - the Major won't stop being paranoid, even if he's in love. But who knows what the future holds?
The Major was a difficult character for me write at first until I realized he is exactly like my father. After that, I had no trouble getting a handle on him. A man with hidden depths.
so sad that they cant be openly together, but I suppose anyone who is together with iron klaus would be in danger. love the ending "all my love forever"
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