Comments | castlegloria: New fic up: Indiana Jones and the Stolen Treasure

annelislashfan in castlegloria

New fic up: Indiana Jones and the Stolen Treasure

Feb 16, 2011 12:38

Today I have posted a new story to my webpage, Indiana Jones and the Stolen Treasure (or - From Mutt With Love). One of my longer ones, 21.062 words. It can be found here ( Read more... )

crossover, author-anne-li

Comments 17

avoidetc February 20 2011, 21:39:06 UTC

(uhh hope you really mean that with not minding that I tend to blabber on a lot because I ended up doing it again ( ... )

annelislashfan February 21 2011, 09:48:42 UTC

If I mind? No, not in the least. I love it. Go right ahead. Comment as much as you want. :) You're being positive about something I've done, I'm eagerly reading every word. :)

Knife kink - well, he did think the knife Dorian holds at one point is a beauty, if that's any indication. Um ... as the author and therefore able to decide what I want in this particular case: he'll like it all right. :)

Long descriptive and modifier sentence - as I said, rather technical in my writing. :) But I'm glad it works for you. :)

You are most welcome! :)

avoidetc February 21 2011, 18:06:04 UTC

Always feel a bit like an idiot when I discover I have to split it into two... But when I have the time I quite enjoy commenting, it makes me think more about a story and also makes me consider exactly what it is I like and why. So maybe I even learn a bit in the process I think. So glad that you enjoy it too.

Rogues Gallery: Natural - of course, now that you have pointed it out. Fanon for me that now.

For someone with a resting pulse that never seems to get under 60 I am ever so envious ;-)

Knife Kink: Nothing like definite author decisions :-)

Descriptive sentences and modifiers: Didn't know that was a technical thing, find it elegant regardless :-)

lauand February 21 2011, 02:03:18 UTC

Not that I think that 21.000 words aren't enough words, but this still left me with hunger for more. I'm curious about how they'll finally get together without the influence of the spear. The Major is already conscious of his own feelings, but I don't think that will make the path any less amusing in the end.

I absolutely love how the Major obliviously used such a powerful artifact to hit some thug on the head.

Thank you very much for sharing!

annelislashfan February 21 2011, 08:44:44 UTC

At the moment I don't plan a sequel, but you never know if the right ideas turn up it would be fun to explore. :)

Heh, yeah, I will say that is one of my favourite details too. :)

You are most welcome and thank you for commenting, it makes me happy! :)