I'm going to read this over and think about it a little more but I have one fairly trivial question. I understand that Cas is afraid to reverse the changes made to his own body because of the baby, but why can't he reverse the changes made to Dean's? Does he think a large exercise of Grace might damage the baby? I actually think the continuing protect mate urges would be a little creepier if Dean were back to normal.
Interesting twist to have Cas be the next Eve. I'm also worried about what "the next world" means. Heaven? Or Earth?
Thanks for the comment! Basically, in Cernunnos Castiel had weakened grace anyway and now that he just went nuclear and experienced a sudden spike in power, he's pretty much spent. What I was trying to get across here was that he doesn't have the "mojo" to fix Dean at the moment and he's a bit ashamed about it which is why Dean's not pressing it.
I totally agree that the over protective babble would be creepy without the modifications as well, but the premise I had in mind while working on this fic was that after all the transformations they've been through, Dean and Castiel are basically the Adam and Eve of Alphas/Omegas although I probably won't ever outright state that in the series. So even without the spells effecting them, until they get their bodies back to normal (if they ever do) they'll have to put up with all the generic A/O junk.
As for what "the next world" means... you'll have to wait for the next part to find out. c;
Has it really been a whole year? Wow :s And yet I still remember the first part of this story very well, that's how good it was. I'm so glad you wrote more to this. Not only were the new mating scenes still creepy-hott, but now I'm hooked into the new storyline as well. Please don't wait another year to write more!!!
ps - just reading the comments above, that's a really interesting idea that Dean and Cas would be the creators of A/O. I know you said you weren't going to write it explicitly but just the thought of how that would affect the world really trips me out ;p
I know, it's crazy how fast it went! Thank you so much tho omg, I'm so happy the creepy direction I took things didn't throw you off any (tho lbr the original prompt kind of called for it). And I promise I won't leave it another year! HOPEFULLY.
sjdhgdsj I'm kind of freaking out rn because I randomly had the idea of Cas and Dean being the start of the A/O species one night and like the fics in this series are named after Celtic fertility Gods and I just kind of thought well what if that's how primitive Alphas/Omegas came about? Like being worshipped as fertility idols? And then I was like I HAVE TO WRITE IT EVEN THO IT'S SO WEIRD AND PEOPLE ARE PROBS GONNA HATE IT BUT I HAVE TO. SO CAS BEING THE EVE OF OMEGAS BECAME A THING AND POSSIBLY THE EVE OF PURGATORY NOW TOO LOL.
I am most definitely interested in the next part of this story! I really adored Cernunnos, but I thought it was going to be a stand alone so i'm supper excited that there's more.
The creepy premise of their transformations was fascinating on it's own, but the plot you're introducing just kicked everything up to the next level! Thank you so much for sharing!
Thanks bb! I kind of always planned on writing a sequel, I just had no ideas for a long time and then I ended up writing like 3/4 of it within a week, but hopefully it won't take that long to write the next.
I'm so happy you liked it and that the direction I'm taking the plot works for you though like jsghdfkj. I WAS SO NERVOUS ABOUT POSTING THIS MAN.
I really enjoyed this story & only read Cernunnos prior to this, but I would love to read the third part! This was so well-written, you could really feel Dean's rage and despair as he changed and was helpless to stop his body from conforming to the changes. I also thought the tenderness and love between them showed through and I hope even once they escape Purgatory they are still together. And I loved it when Castiel's grace kicked in and he went nuclear! Kick it in the ass, Cass!
sdlkjsg thank youuu! I'm thrilled Dean's voice came across for you. I definitely wanted to explore how angry he was that the monsters were doing this to them and how he'd reconcile the trauma and torture they were going through with how he felt towards Cas, as well as whether it was the changes to his biology that were driving their feelings or if it was just them. It was certainly a fun head space to play in!
So glad you like it though! ;w; The third part will be underway soon.<3
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Interesting twist to have Cas be the next Eve. I'm also worried about what "the next world" means. Heaven? Or Earth?
Would definitely read part three! :)
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I totally agree that the over protective babble would be creepy without the modifications as well, but the premise I had in mind while working on this fic was that after all the transformations they've been through, Dean and Castiel are basically the Adam and Eve of Alphas/Omegas although I probably won't ever outright state that in the series. So even without the spells effecting them, until they get their bodies back to normal (if they ever do) they'll have to put up with all the generic A/O junk.
As for what "the next world" means... you'll have to wait for the next part to find out. c;
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Looking forward to all the fall out :)
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Thanks for commenting bb!
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ps - just reading the comments above, that's a really interesting idea that Dean and Cas would be the creators of A/O. I know you said you weren't going to write it explicitly but just the thought of how that would affect the world really trips me out ;p
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sjdhgdsj I'm kind of freaking out rn because I randomly had the idea of Cas and Dean being the start of the A/O species one night and like the fics in this series are named after Celtic fertility Gods and I just kind of thought well what if that's how primitive Alphas/Omegas came about? Like being worshipped as fertility idols? And then I was like I HAVE TO WRITE IT EVEN THO IT'S SO WEIRD AND PEOPLE ARE PROBS GONNA HATE IT BUT I HAVE TO. SO CAS BEING THE EVE OF OMEGAS BECAME A THING AND POSSIBLY THE EVE OF PURGATORY NOW TOO LOL.
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The creepy premise of their transformations was fascinating on it's own, but the plot you're introducing just kicked everything up to the next level! Thank you so much for sharing!
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I'm so happy you liked it and that the direction I'm taking the plot works for you though like jsghdfkj. I WAS SO NERVOUS ABOUT POSTING THIS MAN.
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So glad you like it though! ;w; The third part will be underway soon.<3
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