TSCC - "Cobwebbed Soul" - PG

[castellan_craft]

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The bus ride was less then smooth, and every pot hole that flipped her hair out of her face caused a stab of paranoia that someone had seen her and was a quick step away from recognition. It was just her luck that the local police were on a tear about car theft after busting a chop shop. Now Sarah was stuck using public transportation to meet

Comments

[amilyn]

This is genius. The use of language is stark and gripping, and Sarah's emotions and logic and their war with one another are shown gut-wrenchingly clearly.

Really excellent. Thank you.

[castellan_craft]

Thank you so much! I was worried this one was gonna fall flat; glad the internal conflict was believable. Sarah's stoiciness is a pain to work with sometimes. XD

[castellan_craft]

I welcome any silly suggestions that might lead to more inspiration, but be prepared to take your lumps when I bap you for the uninspiring ones given your inability to censor your smartassery. XD <3

[gothamite66]

Excellent.

[castellan_craft]

Thanks!