Unfolded (PG-13) Hermione/Krum

[castaliae]

Title: Unfolded
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hermione/Krum
Summary:  Stories of her past unfolded shaking out the pain and laughter.

When Hermione was sixty four Kayla sat down upon her grandmother’s lap and asked for a story.  Maybe it was the innocent tone of voice curiously begging for the attention and knowledge a story could provide or perhaps it was

Comments

[artaxastra]

This is good, dealing with the long aftermath, with the echoes that go on and on.

she’d been living louder to fill up the silences.

I love this line in particular. It's very, very Ginny.

And a good Viktor, showing all that's best about him.

[castaliae]

Thank you so much. Your comments mean alot.

I liked that line too, it seemed the way she might react.

Oh, I'm glad Viktor came across well. I must admit, I hadn't given him that much thought before, but he's an interesting character to have around, especially for post-War pieces.

[anonymous]

Aw, this was sad yet sweet. Have you thought of linking it to the Viktor/Hermione comm?

http://www.livejournal.com/community/viktorhermione

~A nonjournalling Krum-bum

[castaliae]

Thanks so much. I'm glad a Krum afficianado liked it. I was just typing the first paragraph and suddenly Krum added itself to Kayla's name almost without my knowledge and I was stuck with this character I didn't really know much about.

Maybe I will link it over. Thanks again.

[verdenia]

aww. sweet and a bit sad and quite well-done.
I, too, liked the line about living louder to fill the spaces.
Cheers!

[castaliae]

Thanks. I liked that line alot as well.