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traces, part two.

Aug 30, 2010 19:57

Title: Traces
Part: 2 of 10
Characters: David Beckham, Martín Cáceres, Fabio Cannavaro, Iker Casillas, Royston Drenthe, Julien Faubert, Fernando Gago, Raúl González, Pep Guardiola, Thierry Henry, Guti Hernández, Xavi Hernández, Gonzalo Higuaín, Andrés Iniesta, Bojan Krkić, Lionel Messi, Ruud van Nistelrooy, Gerard Piqué, Carles Puyol, Sergio Ramos ( Read more... )

andrés iniesta, ruud van nistelrooy, traces, iker casillas, michel salgado, lionel messi, raúl, david beckham, carles puyol, guti, miguel torres, royston drenthe, fernando gago, gerard piqué, xavi hernández, gonzalo higuaín, fabio cannavaro, bojan krkić, rubén de la red, fic, martín cáceres, thierry henry, sergio ramos, julien faubert, pep guardiola

Comments 18

jungle_moon August 30 2010, 14:13:01 UTC

Wow..I can see the edge of the light here already..though just slightly. And it is all still so mysterious!

(So sad that Becks is the dead one here! ;()

So yeah..keep posting it up yeah! XD

casi_casi August 31 2010, 04:04:30 UTC

I'm glad that things are starting to get a tiny bit clearer! And I will certainly keep posting. :)

Thanks ever so much for reading & commenting!

eileenyx August 31 2010, 01:00:48 UTC

Yes! So exciting. I don't even know where to start ( ... )

casi_casi August 31 2010, 04:10:17 UTC

Oh my god. ♥

It sounds futile to keep hurling the words 'thank you so much' in your direction, but I can honestly think of nothing else to say. Everything you've written is so gratifying and inspiring and encouraging. Your eye for detail makes this all feel so worthwhile, and your praise just makes me want to write better.

I'm really glad you're finding the characters interesting, particularly Raúl and Guti, since they're the centrepiece. I'm enjoying writing them all so much.

How has Sergio managed to drop out of the Union without dying?
He's still in the Union! He just doesn't turn up to meetings; they're not obliged to (hence everyone's surprise when Michel turns up, as he doesn't often). :)

I'm the lucky one. Thank you again.

influira August 31 2010, 02:44:05 UTC

aslkdfjakljfkal raul and guti, my loves.

AND SERGIO RAMOS ahahhahahaah. i adore this so much.

casi_casi August 31 2010, 04:03:54 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad to hear it. Thank you so so much for reading, love.

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casi_casi September 1 2010, 08:03:53 UTC

Oh, such compliments. Thank you so very much. I'm so glad that you're happy to see Ruud and Gago in this, and the response I've gotten about the Raúl and Guti dynamic has been so lovely. Thank you again, love!

kitty69lover August 31 2010, 19:17:32 UTC

now i must confess i suck at murder mysteries and i will probably be the last to guess who did it and why. this was just heads up.

this chapter is magnificent. full of information for those paying close attention yet keeping the cards close to its chest, somehow.

i like Guti-Raul interaction most and diverse name dropping [Xavi the coroner! squee] and the way the plot is piecing itself together. it's still not very clear to me, but i think so far you're holding the reigns of this remarkably, especially given the number of characters.

i also feel that every character will end up being of importance, nothing's random, nothing's minor. so teehee Martin the cleaner <3

and of course, Bojan. my god that boy. he's always in the middle of things.

beautiful, can't wait for part 3

casi_casi September 1 2010, 08:02:11 UTC

Thank you so, so much for reading and for leaving such a lovely comment! I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.

Your feedback is really quite priceless, and it's great to hear that I'm on the right track regarding how much I want readers to know.

nothing's random, nothing's minor
Spot on. :)

And I suck at murder mysteries too, so god knows why I'm writing one!