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casi_casi

promise.

May 19, 2009 00:10

Title: Promise
Pairing: Sergio Ramos / Fernando Torres.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Imagination - it's a beautiful thing, no?
Feedback > life. If you feel the need to give constructive criticism, please do.

( disappointed people clinging onto bottles, and when it comes, it's so, so disappointing )

fic, sernando, sergio ramos, fernando torres

Comments 36

burnxthisxcity May 18 2009, 14:24:42 UTC

That was amazingly beautiful <3

casi_casi May 20 2009, 11:22:21 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

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casi_casi May 20 2009, 11:23:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you think so, since that is exactly what I was going for. :)

_unashamed May 18 2009, 14:55:10 UTC

That was so, so sweet.
And it's a nice change to see shy, insecure Sergio.
<3

casi_casi May 20 2009, 11:23:36 UTC

Thanks very much, I'm so glad you think so. :)

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casi_casi May 20 2009, 11:24:38 UTC

LOL I'm glad to be of service! Always happy to provide you with fic.
Thanks so much for reading, hun. :)

adorerdollylux May 18 2009, 16:08:16 UTC

ohmygod you made me cry. this was so painful and beautiful.

He could hear Sergio's soft breaths from a metre away, he could feel his desperation ringing through the air that separated them.

All those places which were neglected by everyone's fingers but Fernando's - insistent fingers now threading through hair which was rapidly growing wetter, as a palm rested gently on his back, as lips moved upwards to his jawline, his cheek, his mouth.

and the last line. god those two. thank you so much for writing this.

casi_casi May 20 2009, 11:25:51 UTC

Aw, hun! I'm sorry! *hugs*

Thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment. I'm really pleased that you liked this. ♥