fatal flaw, part V.

[casi_casi]

Title: Fatal Flaw
Chapter: 5 / 6
Characters: Fernando Torres / Sergio Ramos, Xabi Alonso / Steven Gerrard, David Silva / David Villa, Frank Lampard / John Terry, Raúl / Guti, Cesc Fàbregas, Fernando Gago, Iker Casillas, Xavi Hernández, Rubén de la Red, Pepe Reina, Daniel Agger, Sami Hyypiä, Gonzalo Higuaín, Didier Drogba, Santi Cazorla, Álvaro

Comments

[stevie23]

stevie walked out on Xabi??? NOOOO! Am so loving this story hun. Got me waiting to see what happens next..

[casi_casi]

Yes! (Unfortunately.)

Thank you so much. ♥ I really hope you like the wrap-up.

[casi_casi]

Asfkakashdsgs your comments slay me! Thank you so much for the precious, precious feedback. I love you infinitely.

I am indeed working on explaining everything in the last part! I'm really hoping I don't leave anything out.

I have the feeling Gago might not be so loyal to Raúl and Guti after all...
Guti clearly isn´t happy with Raúl
Bingo! On both counts. :D

Thanks again for the wonderful comment - I really hope you like the last part. ♥

[alor]

aaaaaah, Stevie. D:

This is so addicting, so srs. Actually, I went and looked through that footie exchange thing to look for the final part HAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHA. IKR, stalkerish. HAHHAHA. Anyways. Mhm. I'm going to continue commenting cause I didn't there and everything, and yeah. ♥

[casi_casi]

Oh, thanks a lot! Really, it's so flattering to hear that you've found this addictive. :D

But I do plan on changing the ending a bit! Not too much. But there's stuff I haven't explained, and stuff that seems rushed now that I've read it back, so I'm doing some editing/rewriting. :)

[alor]

REALLY? omg. HAHAHAHA. Was there anything you changed in this, or previous ones? Cause I went and found the rest of the chapters right after I read the frist. HAHAHAHAHA.

[casi_casi]

I'd just added a few lines here and there, to make everything a little clearer and stop the whole thing from feeling so rushed. And I fixed spelling mistakes and such. :) So the chapters posted here, rather than those at footie_exchange are the final versions. :)

[foxing]

Alrighty.
I'll be back to you know, do my long comment thing and rehash your thoughts and all that jazz. But now is not the best time. I'll probably reply during first period tomorrow. LOL.

But I have no doubt that this will be lovely. Times a billion. Though actually, there will probably be tears, because as the chapter before the last one, there has to be more drama and heartache.

So, the tears will be lovely! :D
<3

[casi_casi]

Aw, I think I'm in love with you. ♥

There's no rush to read this! I just really hope you like it. And you're very right about the drama - it has to get worse before it can get better!

[foxing]

Alrighty, Megan is back in action! Bahaha. Oh by the way, that's me, Megan. Quite pleased to make your acquaintance.

STEVEN IS CEO?! WHAT. WHAT. WHAT?!
Well, that's not gonna go over real well. I mean, if you didn't notice, I'm not taking the news too well myself. LOL.

nonetheless relieved that he'd gone a whole five hours without smashing a single glass.
Oh Santi. You little adorable fireball. *glomps*

He barely stopped a groan of frustration as he fought the will to kick himself and tear out his hair and swear loudly all at once.
Honestly, that's probably safer. Good move, oh Silvaaa. I tried to do that, groan, kick, tear out my hair and swear at once.
It wasn't a successful exercise.

Silva had disappeared with Villa and slouched, coughing, against a wall in a nearby alleyway. Vague shouts and crashing noises were floating in from the main street as Silva ignored the dizziness in his head and cradled Villa's body, completely still and covered in ash.Why do you kill me such words! Have I not explained enough that these two are

[casi_casi]

LOL, nice to meet you! I'm Ish. By the way - I'm adding you as a friend. You seem entirely too awesome to not be on my flist. :D

Ahhhhh, I don't know how to thank you for your comments! I love how you pick up on little details that I didn't think anyone would notice / care about, and the fact that you're so excited about this makes me terribly excited as well, and it's just one big excitement fest. :D You're so generous, thank you so very much! ♥

SILVA HAS NICE LOOKING LEGS AND A VERY CUTE TUSH. HE ALSO HAS UNRULY HAIR THAT I LIKE TO PLAY WITH AFTER WE HAVE HAD SEXYTIMES. O HAI. DON'T GET ANY IDEAS. I'VE CALLED DIBS.
--David Villa
I lol'd. In all honesty.

I will bring more! But vast amounts of editing and rewriting must be done first; there's so much stuff that needs to be explained and added in. :)

[casi_casi]

Ha, that's alright! It's one thing to ask people to read this massively long fic, it's quite another to expect comments as well! Comments are a bonus, really. :)

Wahey, I'm glad the Álvaro love is catching on! He is indeed a bit of a dish. Although I prefer his hair fluffy, I must say...

(I'm in love with Gago too.)

[casi_casi]

LOL, blushing at an icon.

I HAVE DONE THE SAME THING THAT JOE BLOODY COLE NOW DOES TO ME!