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casi_casi

fatal flaw, part III.

Jan 20, 2009 01:00

Title: Fatal Flaw
Chapter: 3 / 6
Characters: Fernando Torres / Sergio Ramos, Xabi Alonso / Steven Gerrard, David Silva / David Villa, Frank Lampard / John Terry, Raúl / Guti, Cesc Fàbregas, Fernando Gago, Iker Casillas, Xavi Hernández, Rubén de la Red, Pepe Reina, Daniel Agger, Sami Hyypiä, Gonzalo Higuaín, Didier Drogba, Santi Cazorla, Álvaro ( Read more... )

john terry, fatal flaw, xabi alonso, iker casillas, fernango gago, raúl, guti, cesc fàbregas, sami hyypiä, daniel agger, david silva, sergio agüero, gonzalo higuaín, xavi hernández, álvaro arbeloa, josé mourinho, didier drogba, rubén de la red, steven gerrard, fic, rafa benítez, frank lampard, sergio ramos, pepe reina, santi cazorla, fernando torres, david villa

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casi_casi January 21 2009, 10:39:11 UTC

I'm always happy to provide a distraction. :)

Oooh, thanks very much for your comments on those characters, it's always great to know which ones people are getting into! And please do continue to speculate - it's very entertaining to read that kind of thing!

jumping_down January 19 2009, 16:39:27 UTC

I know I haven't commented for the previous parts, but I sincerely love this series. I don't know how you were able to pull it off. A superhero AU prompt sounds crack, but when I read your story, I honestly believed it and I wasn't bothered with the entire there-are-no-superheroes doubts! The plot and characterization was strong and it really feels like you've planned this so thoroughly already. Awesome job, bb. Can't wait for the next parts. :D

casi_casi January 21 2009, 10:42:06 UTC

Wow, thank you so much. It's so wonderful to get that kind of feedback - I appreciate it so, so much. ♥

The prompt from nahco3 was just priceless. And yes, I planned the entire thing beforehand, so it's incredibly gratifying to hear that from you!

stevie23 January 19 2009, 16:48:21 UTC

This is going so well. Can't wait to see where this goes. Post more soon.

casi_casi January 21 2009, 10:42:35 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying it so far. I hope you end up liking where it goes. :)

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casi_casi January 21 2009, 10:44:53 UTC

Oh, thanks so much for your very thorough comment! It's so priceless to get feedback like that, so I appreciate it a lot. ♥

I'm glad you feel sorry for Sergio as well - I do, too. As for Gago, well, while there probably isn't more of him in subsequent chapters, he's explained a little more, along with the rest of the mysteries, so I hope you're pleased with that. :)

alor January 19 2009, 18:52:54 UTC

mkay, I love this.

casi_casi January 21 2009, 10:45:16 UTC

I love you for loving this! Thanks so much for reading & commenting. ♥