fatal flaw, part II.

[casi_casi]

Title: Fatal Flaw
Chapter: 2 / 6
Characters: Fernando Torres / Sergio Ramos, Xabi Alonso / Steven Gerrard, David Silva / David Villa, Frank Lampard / John Terry, Raúl / Guti, Cesc Fàbregas, Fernando Gago, Iker Casillas, Xavi Hernández, Rubén de la Red, Pepe Reina, Daniel Agger, Sami Hyypiä, Gonzalo Higuaín, Didier Drogba, Santi Cazorla, Álvaro

Comments

[alor]

ooooomg. ♥ you are brillianttttt.

[casi_casi]

Oh! *blushes furiously*
I'm inclined to disagree, but thank you so so much anyway. ♥

[life_valencia]

that was such a great read! i love that´s lot of the player that i love in it!
cesc is sooo fanny! :)
and iker is just adorable been when he´s bitching around! and i like xavi, he make me have a big smile on my face!!!!

and i LOVE SILVA AND DAVID, i love their plot. and i also feel sorry for them!!! :(

OOOOOOOOOOW
xabi and stevie ROCKKKKK ITTT!!!
i love the tension between then! and how both of them talk to each other!! i´m really looking for moreeee of them!

and sernando is always cool! :)

agger:) he´s soo cute!!!

i kind make the comment for the two parts, cause i read both of them just now!

i´ll be waiting for more!!! :) hope you update soon!

[casi_casi]

Oh my gosh, thank you so much. It's so great to hear that you're enjoying this so far, and I really hope you like the rest of the series! Thanks for all your comments on the characters - it's always useful to find out what people like to read. :)

[casi_casi]

Oh, I'm glad you approve of the Gago!fun. :D

Thanks so much for your comment, you are wonderful.

[foxing]

The irony of the strongman being brought to his knees with a few words (and a nifty superhuman ability) is really rather disconcerting. To use Fernando's word. ;)

Oh Silva. Stay strong bb! Somehow I feel like the mask between Silva and David is going to be torn down. Which, theoretically, is good for a relationship. But I don't think The Force are allowed relationships. *worry lines galore*

XABI AND STEVEN. STOP BEING RIDICULOUS AND LOVE EACH OTHER. PLZKTHNXBAI.

Still delicious with every word. :)

[casi_casi]

Oh, I do love your comment, it made me smile. :D It's wonderful to hear that kind of stuff about the characters, and I love that you're liking this story so far. Thanks so much for reading and for your words of encouragement, it means a lot. ♥

[stevie23]

yes, have decided that i like where this is going. Hope you update soon.

[casi_casi]

Oh! That's great to hear. :D Thank you very much.