the heist

[casi_casi]

I finished exams yesterday! *throws confetti* And now - three and half months of holidays!!
So to celebrate, I thought I'd post the biggest piece of crack I've ever written. It actually has paragraphs. :D

Title: The Heist
Characters: Steven Gerrard / Xabi Alonso, Daniel Agger / Steve Finnan, Fernando Torres, Pepe Reina, Álvaro Arbeloa, Javier

Comments

[moriker]

1) I have the same brain as Xabi! Straight away I knew they are going to have to get Masch! Hehehe.

2) Finn's scouse phonecall to Rafa's wife. I actually pronounced out the entire part. -is stupid-

3) This story is epic. 'Dense' Fernando and Stevie. HAHAHA.

[casi_casi]

1) Xabi would be most impressed by your brainpower. :D

2) You're not stupid! I was talking to myself as I wrote it, trying to get the accent as accurate as possible. (I'm not sure I succeeded, but oh well.) I was hoping others would pronounce it out too!

3) Thank you so much! That's really very kind of you. I'm just really happy it made you laugh. (I do love Fernando and Stevie when they're being dim!)

[casi_casi]

Oh, your comment literally made me laugh out loud!

I'm afraid the only thing I'm "on" is sheer delirium. But I'm very willing to share!

Thanks very much for your comment, it means a lot. Thrilled to have made you laugh. :D

[maz08]

I loved this from beginning to end.
It was so funny and I could well imagine Alvaro like this!!!
lol :D

[casi_casi]

Thank you so much! It's always great to know that someone has enjoyed your fic, so thanks a lot for your comment!

(And I'm glad you could imagine Álvaro the way I wrote him - I'd like to think he's a bit loopy.)

[camillaah]

Pepe shuddered at the memory of Fernando's tone-deafness, which he'd been all too unlucky to witness after Spain had won the Euro's, when Fernando had injested a little too much alcohol and gotten a little too excited when Álvaro had pulled out his Shakira CD.

This bit is just pure amazingness. I actually laughed out loud! Great. :D

The bit with the Christmas party and everybody's costumes is sooo funny. You're such a great writer. :) Fernando as Legolas is awesome and Xabi & Stevie as Romeo and Juliet. XDDDD

You're a legend! :D &You're very quickly becoming 1 of my favourite people on here lovely. :)

[casi_casi]

Aw, thanks a lot for that comment, hun! Really appreciate it. :D

This bit is just pure amazingness. I actually laughed out loud! Great. :D
Glad to hear it! What's better is that Álvaro actually does listen to Shakira in real life. XD

I'm so happy that you liked the Christmas party scene! It was a lot of fun to write - thinking of all the costumes (and non-costumes). :)

Aw, you're lovely. I think you're one of my favourite people, too! *hugs you*

[camillaah]

No problem, hun! It was a pleasure to read your fic, you're simply fabulous at writing! You've gotta write another. :D

BAHAHA oh Alvaro. That's hysterical. XD

Oh most definitely, the Christmas party scene has to be my favourite bit! Along with Fernando's confused ramblings "We can't see into Rafa's office from here. Is too far." and Dan's explosion mess. XD Bless him! Finns in this is mega cute too, I miss him so much.

Aw thankyou! *hugs back*

[casi_casi]

Thanks so much! ♥ I'm actually thinking of writing another piece like this. :)

I love Álvaro in real life - he seems like such an awesome, funny person. Shakira, LOL. XD

Oh, I miss Finns too! When I found out that we'd sold him, I thought about cutting him out of this fic, but I just couldn't do it. He's too lovely.

[kat_lys]

I finished exams yesterday! *throws confetti* And now - three and half months of holidays!!
Happy holidays! :D Hope your exams went well!

Your fic made me smile so much, especially Alvaro! It was a funny thing to read, with the boys trying to make a plan to get back the watch^^

"Stevie's not stupid, he's just a little. . . well. . ."
"Stupid."
This made me laugh out loud. I like the relationship between Xabi and Stevie, with Stevie being like an idiot and Xabi being the responsible one. And as always, your lines are hilarious. XD

I love your crack fics!

[casi_casi]

Thank you! Yep, exams went better than I'd expected them to! I can't help but be thrilled that they're over, though. :)

Thanks a lot for your comment! I'm really glad you liked the story and the characters - Álvaro was a joy to write. And of course, I'm glad it made you laugh.

with Stevie being like an idiot and Xabi being the responsible one
I think they're like that in real life, don't you? :D

Thanks again, hun, I really appreciate the lovely feedback!