SPN Drabble - You Whisper a Promise

[casey28]

Too young to understand, but old enough to remember, you can’t process all the images that flash through your mind. When you try to think about that night, you’re weighed down by a grief that's heavier than the stars. Your mother is windblown ash that circles the world, until every trace of her fades. Your tears try to follow, but they’re lost

Comments

[stir_of_echoes]

That was both beautiful and heart-wrenching.

This: Dad is lost too, even though he’s standing right in front of you. and this: and the only thing that anchors you to this world is safely tucked in your arms.

So very true!

*sniffs*

[casey28]

Thanks so much. <3 I'm glad you liked those lines!

[firesign10]

Super lovely!!!

[casey28]

Thanks so much!!!

[cassiopeia7]

That is beautiful. ♥ I always get wibbly when a terrified Dean stands in the yard, watching the destruction of his life, but still manages to whisper "It's okay, Sammy." That moment KILLS me, and your drabble brought it all back.

[casey28]

Thanks so much. ♥ Oh yes, him saying that to comfort his brother.. it's a very special moment.

[roxymissrose]

beautiful.

[casey28]

Thanks so much. <3

[supernutjapan]

It's beautiful <3<3 I love the imagery. Ashes circling the world, tears lost in the wind. The only thing that anchors you to this world.
Poetry.

[casey28]

Thanks so much. <3 I'm glad you love the imagery.