A mini poem

[casey28]

Hollow

Hands search in cupboards bare
In empty bins they scrape
To feast upon the tiny bits
That dusty crumbs do make

Hollow are the empty bones
that creak upon the floor
Where dust is air to skeletons
that starve forever more

poem by me

Comments

[primula_baggins]

Ooh, creepy!!
💀

[casey28]

Thanks, I was going for creepy and spooky! 💀

[deborahkla]

This is terrific. Happy Halloween!

[casey28]

Thanks so much! Happy Halloween to you, too!

[deborahkla]

Thnks!

[shirebound]

*shivers*

[casey28]

Glad it gave you the shivers!

[amethyst_witch]

Very well done, my friend. Really conveyed the emotion (hollow/empty) ♥

[casey28]

Thanks so much! I'm glad that you felt the emotion from it (hollow/empty).♥

[lijahlover]

Ohhhh such a perfect Halloween poem.

[casey28]

Yay, thanks so much!