L makes such an awesome Misa fanboy. And XDXD so Rem is female after all. I keep tryong to imagine L as frightening (as opposed to creepy, creepy I can imagine) and failing.
*silent scream* An update! An update! *dances about*
Its been said before so I'm obviously not an original kind of person. -cough- I read through this in one sitting and have found that I'm going to be scarily obsessed with coming here on Tuesdays. I hope your happy with yourself. -huff-
Now the fact that my non-existent life is out in the open to another group of total strangers I say that the idea of Kira forgetting the Death Note and L picking it up is a bit weird but still wonderful for your plot. It would also help to get rid of some of the suspicion on Raito.I don’t like the translation of his name to Light so I’m sticking with Raito. Sadly though I'm a paranoid kind of person and so the fact that he went into the dressing room before L means I'm going to think he left the Death Note out on purpose and made a huge commotion then ran off for the purpose of getting suspicion off himself
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I'm glad you like it. I'm not sticking to a schedule right now because I'm rather swamped with work, but I'll update as often as I will.
My name at ff.net is vvoltaire, if you're looking for my other work. I haven't posted anything DNwise there, but I've written for a bunch of fandoms, so you may find something else to read.
Eek! Sorry for the late comment, but I had to say how happy I am to realize that you're still updating this story. I liked Misa's "confession" and how she mentions a boy that could or could not still be Raito, but with the Death Note in L's hands we know the action is going to pick up the pace. I wonder, since Ryuk and Rem are actual people how the Death Note is going to be working and if you'll be explaining if it says anything in side next chapter?
Also, I loved the recap, it helped a bunch to refresh my memory before I read this part.
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*silent scream* An update! An update! *dances about*
Carry on.
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Now the fact that my non-existent life is out in the open to another group of total strangers I say that the idea of Kira forgetting the Death Note and L picking it up is a bit weird but still wonderful for your plot. It would also help to get rid of some of the suspicion on Raito.I don’t like the translation of his name to Light so I’m sticking with Raito. Sadly though I'm a paranoid kind of person and so the fact that he went into the dressing room before L means I'm going to think he left the Death Note out on purpose and made a huge commotion then ran off for the purpose of getting suspicion off himself ( ... )
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My name at ff.net is vvoltaire, if you're looking for my other work. I haven't posted anything DNwise there, but I've written for a bunch of fandoms, so you may find something else to read.
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Also, I loved the recap, it helped a bunch to refresh my memory before I read this part.
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