Believe Me I'm Lying - Part Five

Oct 04, 2011 21:59

"Luke!" Lily Snyder sounded more than just a little bit surprised when saw her son and to her an unknown man enter the house together.

"Hey mom." Luke said, faking a smile before he went to greet her with a hug. "Sorry that we're showing up just like that without calling beforehand."

"It's fine honey. I'm glad that you're here, it's been a while ( Read more... )

fic: believe me i'm lying, pairing: luke/reid

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nancygrew October 7 2011, 05:44:41 UTC
Nice job. I like the kind of cluelessness of Holden and Lily [it seemed in character]. And I really enjoyed that you made Margo all capable and badass.

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sleeper6 October 7 2011, 18:36:26 UTC
Yay for Katie and Margo!

Oh, man, can't wait for the next part.

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tldreamer October 7 2011, 22:53:27 UTC
Yay for Margo! And yay for Luke!

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donia23 October 9 2011, 17:02:49 UTC
finally derek is arrested

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drunkyluke October 11 2011, 21:34:40 UTC
finally, FINALLY!!! god, i thought derek was actually going to get away with it. god lily, could you be any more naive? i mean really, your son comes home with some guy and you're ok with them going on vacation? REALLY?! holden too. thank god for katie. wow, margo you finally did something correctly. about time. YAAY LUKE!!!!

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