Comments | carylic: FIC: Romance Is Dead

carylic

FIC: Romance Is Dead

Dec 09, 2005 16:57

Disclaimer: I would now like to perform for you the 'Not Mine' dance complete with tassels and body chocolate

...

Wasn't that fun!

Romance Is Dead

Pairing: Drarry
Rating: R/NC17ish
Warnings: Dubious consent on both sides. (Yes, it's possible)
Betaed By: angelgazing (any mistakes still there are mine because I purposely ignored her on a few issues.)
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Comments 11

chuffing December 9 2005, 07:42:19 UTC

well, that's fucked up, innit! i had to read it twice. it's twisty, i love it.

Dubious consent on both sides. (Yes, it's possible)

apparently it is! haha i could not figure out how you would do that, but you managed it. :DD

carylic December 9 2005, 08:20:32 UTC

Yes. Sorry. Yay!

but you managed it

ya, fear my brain patterns ...

abremaline December 9 2005, 15:21:07 UTC

ooo veela!fic.

And a very good, originally done one too!

berrynia December 9 2005, 15:27:36 UTC

oooo yay. very funky.

glad to see those drugs are working out for u :D:P

fanfictionfreak December 9 2005, 15:40:05 UTC

very good job...I really liked it...its twisty and confusing in the good sort of way.

carylic December 15 2005, 12:48:32 UTC

Twisty can be fun :D

Glad you liked.

lilian_cho December 13 2005, 00:50:27 UTC

Woohoo! Veela!Harry <3 <3 <3

"I do wish you wouldn't call for me during the week." Is the sleepy whisper before he leaves out the window.

I love the turning point!

And the boy is rather arrogant and a bit of a spoiled brat

Of course when I first read it I thought it was Draco. But then...it's "rather arrogant" and "a bit of a spoiled brat" *g*

lilian_cho December 13 2005, 00:52:46 UTC

Gah! Of course, it's James!

Again, love the twistiness of this fic.

carylic December 15 2005, 12:47:55 UTC

Lol, ya, twas james ... I was actually a little worried I didn't make it quite clear, which is the only reason this fic has the footnote ...

glad you liked :D

lilian_cho December 15 2005, 23:18:19 UTC

On the second re-read I thought the arrogant boy was Harry, but then I read this part...

And he's in love and married and a father and happy. Then he's dead and it's all very sudden and a touch 'not fair'. Harry watches the man's son sit in a small cupboard playing with some broken toys, talking to the spiders that are his only company.

So I think it's plenty clear, I just didn't read it carefully enough the first time around.