Growl baby! Very Growl! I like where this is going... Only thing about your writing that seems a little - different than other stories I've read is that this is all dialogue. There is no sneering or hungry glances, nor pacing of the room or exaberated hand gestures to emphasize their words. But maybe that's what you were going for. Anywho, are you going to write a part two? Maybe NC-17?
I kinda like the all dialog thing. I'm not sure why. That's just the way it came out. I don't usually write that way. I wasn't really planning on a second part, mainly because I've never really written a sex scene before and I'm not sure it would be any good, but I'll probably try it, just to see if I can. Anyway, thanks for reading it!
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I wasn't really planning on a second part, mainly because I've never really written a sex scene before and I'm not sure it would be any good, but I'll probably try it, just to see if I can.
Anyway, thanks for reading it!
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