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carter_sg1

Almost Perfect Chapter Three

Aug 06, 2007 16:24

As Ron walked through the portrait hole of Gryffindor Tower, the one thing that struck him was not that it was half full of people who had elected to stay at Hogwarts to aid with the rebuilding process, but rather that a good number of them belonged to Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw. The password would be reset in September - if that ( Read more... )

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abusing_sarcasm August 6 2007, 20:47:20 UTC

Beautiful! I love how you wrapped everything up so nicely. And lol at Harry still trying to keep away from Ginny for "her own good." When will he ever learn? :)

carter_sg1 August 6 2007, 20:51:34 UTC

Thank you again. I'm always encouraged by your reviews.

I thought it was appropriate to throw in one last attempt on Harry's part to stay away from Ginny :)

alenar August 6 2007, 20:55:28 UTC

Lovely, lovely job. Everyone was very in character, and I especially liked how you portrayed Ron.

carter_sg1 August 6 2007, 21:12:16 UTC

Thanks :D I know there's nothing worse than reading a fic where everyone is OOC.

alenar August 6 2007, 21:23:36 UTC

Seriously. :)

Yours was really good though so no worries on that end.

I'd like to see more from you!

carter_sg1 August 6 2007, 21:34:58 UTC

Thanks, that means a lot. I hope I can find the time to write more.

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kanedax August 6 2007, 21:04:48 UTC

Good way to finish things up. Nicely written characterization, too.

carter_sg1 August 6 2007, 21:13:23 UTC

Glad you liked the way it ended. Thanks for reading :)

fasttalkingdame August 6 2007, 21:35:26 UTC

Oh man, I loved all three chapters! I hope you write more sometime!

carter_sg1 August 6 2007, 21:39:50 UTC

Thank you for those kind words. I was worried about it being too short, but it was never meant to be a long, drawn-out fic. I hope to write more too ;)

fasttalkingdame August 6 2007, 21:56:08 UTC

Well, whether you continue this fic or write another, I hope to read it!

lala0136 August 6 2007, 21:48:33 UTC

though it makes me sound like an intense fan girl, i'm going to say it...

*squeeee*

I think my favourite thing you ever say is "lips crashing" it evokes strong memories for me and I can imagine kissing someone that passionately. well said.

carter_sg1 August 6 2007, 21:57:53 UTC

LOL... don't worry, I can be a pretty intense fan girl too :D

Glad you liked the "lips crashing" line. We should all be lucky enough to have someone we can remember kissing that passionately.