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Honey, I'm Home

Dec 08, 2011 08:43

Title: Honey, I'm Home
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Ron/Pansy
Word count: 468
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: It's unbeta'd. Apologies all around. And there's swearing. Filthy swearing. And angry sex... Gosh, and it's written in the present tense. WHY DO I DO THAT?!
Author's Notes: This was an answer to a prompt for the hp_humpdrabbles community's Humpfest 2011 ( Read more... )

pansy, ron/pansy, ron

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leigh_adams December 8 2011, 15:56:02 UTC

I love this. I love you.

*SMOOSH*

carrie_leigh December 9 2011, 23:15:43 UTC

I love you, too. :)

nbaeker December 9 2011, 07:38:21 UTC

Well *this* was a lovely reward for finishing my last paper of the semester.

I have so missed these two.

carrie_leigh December 9 2011, 23:16:12 UTC

Aw, thanks. I miss 'em, too.

roni_2010 December 13 2011, 20:14:13 UTC

love it.. i believe i love the characterization of pansy & ron, in this piece!!

heyurs December 17 2011, 19:56:16 UTC

Can you explain the whole thing about the tenses...is present tense so bad? :/

carrie_leigh December 17 2011, 20:01:05 UTC

It really, really bothers some people. If it's done well, I don't mind it. But it puts some of our friends right off.

heyurs December 17 2011, 20:02:24 UTC

I know it does. But, why? And what is the best tense--to everyone?

carrie_leigh December 17 2011, 20:16:31 UTC

I dunno what's best for everyone. Like I said, I'll read anything if it's well written. But if the tenses switch back and forth, from whatever to whatever, I can't read it.

I just put the warning so that people will know and not bother to read it, if it's only going to annoy them.

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