Comments | carrieross: Danny and Martin fanfic: After a rainy day Part 2

carrieross

Danny and Martin fanfic: After a rainy day Part 2

Jun 01, 2006 17:45

I think that two days to digest all the angst provided by Part one might be enough.

This is Part two of the fanfic I wrote because I needed to fill the blanks (and something more) to the end of Martin's addiction storyline. I hope you enjoy it.

I'm cross-posting it in

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dragontatt June 1 2006, 18:11:39 UTC

Don't remember if I commented on part 1 or not...

This whole story has been wonderful. Sad and angsty and real and full of love. Poor boys are only happy when they are together.

Plus a pillow fight!! *smooches you*

Great job, love it all.

carrieross June 1 2006, 19:05:37 UTC

You hadn't, but I was hopeful that you would read it anyway. ;)

Thanks for passing by and I'm glad you enjoyed. Yes, they are so beautiful when they are together, they feel so safe that it hurts.

spoiledjap June 1 2006, 19:05:40 UTC

I love how this ended. This was so them. Although I should've read this at work, oh well :). One other thing, may I friend you?

carrieross June 1 2006, 19:14:28 UTC

Of course you can!! I'm checking this before dinner (and I'm hungry!), but gonna friend you back as soon as I go back to LJ.

Thanks for your appreciation, really!

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carrieross June 2 2006, 08:57:34 UTC

I'm very happy I managed to describe what addiction and withdrawal is about. I think that, realistically, this experience should make both Martin and Danny stronger and more aware of their weaknesses. Last, but not least, together they can feel safe, or so I love to depict them.

leopardchic79 June 2 2006, 03:08:47 UTC

Loved it!! :)

carrieross June 2 2006, 08:58:23 UTC

Thanks for commenting part two, too. I'm happy you liked it.

smilla02 June 2 2006, 09:04:30 UTC

Good, so very good and the end came naturally; I loved the progression in Danny and Martin relationship after Martin went back to work, and their insecurities, so mirroring each other, feels so real and sweet and so Danny and Martin.

The pillow fight was funny *g* and the ending line full of hope.

Thank you for sharing this!

carrieross June 2 2006, 09:16:15 UTC

Thanks. I tried to work from the little they showed us and fill the blanks, the way I would dream it would be. I think that one of the main potentialities of this storyline was the mirroring of their experience, indeed, but I never had the satisfaction to watch it.