Fanfic: The passion fruit

May 15, 2006 16:55


I applied to this challenge to prove myself on some PWP fic. I had three prompts, but could write one. Well, I'm happy I made it, anyway. 
The challenge was Cuff ‘Em, Vamp ‘Em, or Just Make ‘Em Come Already Kink and Cliché Multi-Fandom Challenge 
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danny and martin, wat, fanfic

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le_mot_mo May 15 2006, 17:34:36 UTC
carrieross May 16 2006, 07:45:24 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. It was the first time that I made them... have full sex. I couldn't resist, but insert a more romantic context, though *g*

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le_mot_mo May 17 2006, 14:41:17 UTC

jupiterlullaby May 15 2006, 17:54:21 UTC
Ooh, I like it!! Yummy =)

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carrieross May 16 2006, 07:45:51 UTC
I'm glad it worked for you!!

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smilla02 May 15 2006, 18:24:26 UTC
*cough* Hm, I think I'm going to be in my bunk for the next hour or so ;)
This was seriously good. I liked Martin being all shy but demanding like he can't quite help himself. But I especially loved the end the way they tease each other about it, because it imply trust and a level of familiarity that makes me happy.
Just great!

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carrieross May 16 2006, 07:48:24 UTC
If it really made you that effect I couldn't be happier.

I was terrified that I didn't depict Martin in a realistic and hot way.

I liked to write that teasing line Martin snaps at Danny, too.

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burningchaos May 15 2006, 20:12:58 UTC
Wonderful and very hot and sweet at the same time.

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carrieross May 16 2006, 08:03:14 UTC
Wow! Thank you for leaving such a lovely comment!! I'm glad it worked for you.

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babs6608 May 15 2006, 23:17:29 UTC
that was sooo hot! I love the idea of Martin standing in a queue at the pharmacy, he would have been having palpitations by the time he got served.

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carrieross May 16 2006, 08:06:36 UTC
Yeah, I agree with you about Martin. I even think he would think about cracking some excuse while paying, like "It's not for me, I was asked to buy it" etc.

Thanks for passing by and enjoying it.

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