Comments | carpesoo: i'd wait forever and a day for you

carpesoo

i'd wait forever and a day for you

Oct 02, 2015 01:14

pairing: main: baekhyun/chanyeol, past: baekhyun/jongin, bff: chanyeol/kyungsoo, side: kyungsoo/sehun
genre: college au, romance, slight fluff
rating: pg-13
length: 2,919 words
summary: chanyeol's not exactly a patient guy, but baekhyun's worth the wait.
notes: a massive thank you to mimi for this image that inspired the fic.

i'd wait forever and ( Read more... )

fanfic, pairing: baekhyun/chanyeol, genre: romance, rating: pg-13, member: baekhyun, member: chanyeol, fandom: exo, length: less than 5k

Comments 24

durianparfait October 2 2015, 01:58:50 UTC

This was so sweet♡♡♡

carpesoo October 4 2015, 04:26:21 UTC

thank you so much for reading.

i really wanted to write a short piece to exercise my brain, hehe.

exoternity October 2 2015, 03:01:07 UTC

the rip-off songs make me laugh out so loud

four. fucking. years.
wow Yeol, you da man

Thanks for sharing! <3

carpesoo October 4 2015, 04:27:15 UTC

hahah i was actually on youtube and listening to some random songs and was like, hey... i can use these lyrics for the fic, oh and this one too! and i ended up with a few and just ran with it. hahaha.

yeol is smooth.

thanks so much for reading and commenting ^^

noonaofdarkness October 2 2015, 05:04:16 UTC

I'm on mobile so I can't quote you back to you as much as I want but hommmmgggg you wrote baekyeol 😍 at first I was laughing about chanyeol being a grower and balls deep and then you broke my heart with jongin. I love patient chanyeol and the fact that they got to form a friendship over three years. But my heart still hurt when kyungsoo was telling him to give up after waiting so long. And then the kiss! Followed by more tears.... ;u;; but yay happy ending.

This was so funny and sweet and it hit me in the feels in the really good way.

carpesoo October 4 2015, 04:29:50 UTC

//screams at you. chelseaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~

im still so thankful that you spent the time to read this...... im still shy about it.. hahaha.

but yes, baekyeol!!! i do like baekyeol... the first fanfic that i read and wrote (still incomplete, oop) was baekyeol!

ahhh, i had to give yall a happy ending! and yes, how ideal is chanyeol with his patience???

thank you once again for reading and leaving me such a lovely comment.. im still smiling... eeeeee~

getting hit in the feels is always good. yas yas.

//hugs you. <33

hoyayayaya October 2 2015, 15:02:50 UTC

ha! that was totally cute. i like how the story flows so easily. and that baekyeol moment at the end! that was a nice surprise, didn't expect that all. it ties up the fic so wondefully, like it was coming to a full circle.

thank you for writing and sharing:)

carpesoo October 4 2015, 04:31:08 UTC

awwww, thank you so much for your kind words ^^

i liked the idea of writing a story that had like the same opening and end scene, but at the same time, it be completely different to each other.

thanks again for reading and commenting~~

w_shxn October 4 2015, 02:18:58 UTC

omg??? this was SO CUTE?? & you tell me you aren't capable of writing anything worthy under 5k words??? YOU LIED.

this was absolutely adorable, dm. ❤ i don't read baekyeol much, but maybe i'll read them more often if it means missing good stories such as this! it made me feel all mushy & warm. (●´ω｀●) the part where chanyeol quoted songs was my favorite. he's so silly & cute & istg, your chanyeol is my seriously my ideal boyfriend. ❤ (so is the real pcy, but you get me.) i wish pcy would wait for me, too! loljk.

i also like how you started & ended with the same scene, but with a difference in their relationship (& sesoo's, as well. where is jongin, though?). i just. i seriously love this, bb. you know i'm weak for fluff. ❤ i can't wait to read more from you! (~￣▽￣)~

carpesoo October 4 2015, 04:37:51 UTC

krys-kun. krys-bear. my krys. my one and only krys-poop.

tysm for reading!!! i actually wasnt aware that you dont read much baekyeol, so i am honoured that you read! and your words are far too kind. omg, you are much too nice to me!!!!!

its hard for me to write under 5k, and if i do.. i require massive jump scenes and like, off scene romantic progression. im one for slow build, so its very challenging for me to write actual relationship whilst keeping it short, so i had to insert huge time lapses in this fic. I NEVER LIE. //blows you a kiss.

but ahhhh, you are most adorable. if you think this fic is adorable, then you are this fic. hahaha. but yes, there are some real cute baekyeol fics out there, you should defo give them a chance! but im so very glad that you made you feel all mushy and warm, that is how you make me feel ( ... )