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Fic: Redemption & Reconstruction (13/?) (DG/Cain UST) (PG-13)

Oct 16, 2008 20:17

Title: Redemption & Reconstruction (13/?)
Author: caroly_214
Characters/Pairings: Pretty much everybody, DG/Cain UST (eventual overt DG/Cain)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5,259
Disclaimer: I may share the same name as someone on the show, but that still doesn’t mean I own anything (shame, that). Owen and Telyn ("Telly") Northway, however, are the joint ( Read more... )

tin man, redemption & reconstruction, fic

Comments 6

queenof1000days October 17 2008, 04:00:06 UTC

Telly! You are so lucky I decided not to make this comment entirely filled with just her name.

Excellent job as usual, m'dear. It's an honor to even be remotely connected with this story. I'd tell you more but I'd just be repeating what you've heard from me in our numerous chats.

Now I need a Jeb and Telly icon. Hmm...

wings_unfurling October 17 2008, 04:23:56 UTC

Hi there. I'm a friend of queenof1000days, not a creepy stalker. Just so you know. ;)

I just wanted to say that though I don't read much fanfic, this was incredibly well written and completely engaging. =)

ex_nadeshiko480 October 17 2008, 04:31:51 UTC

YAY for updates!!!

Glad to see that DG, Ahamo, and even Owen are making Lavender take care of herself.

Aw! That is so cute that you named one of the characters after a Sesame Street one! I love that show and Telly was so cute and loveable!

Okay, I'm sorry but someone has got to give Jeb a big ol' reality check here. I know he's upset about Wyatt moving forward with his life, and that's fine as it's natural, but being blantanlty disrespectful to his father is really pushing the envelope here!

Poor DG and Cain, bottling things is not conducive to their health. Glad that they got it out of their system, even if it was hurtful for them.

Can't wait for the next bit!

elliejgirl October 17 2008, 13:48:31 UTC

I love this story soooooooo much. This was such a great chapter. I loved the fight between DG and Cain.

effie214 October 17 2008, 19:55:22 UTC

::insert Effie happy dance here::

Um, Telly FTW! I love strong girls who can stand up to the stubborn Cain boys. Awesome.

Also, you are my freaking hero for the realistic manner in which you portray the characters' emotions and interactions. The fight between Cain and DG is ridiculously appropriate and remarkably well done; you don't shy away from the uncomfortable emotions, and I think it shows just how good a grasp you have on their personalities.

Awesome job!