Fic: Memories

[carolion]

Title: Memories
Author: x_heterophobic
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: R for language and sexual situations
POV: Third
Summary: They ended it, but they never forgot it.
Disclaimer: Do not own, not affiliated with, nor am I speculating anything about the relationship between Frank and Gerard or Frank and his wife.
Author Notes: Forgive me.
Warnings: Not much.

Comments

[_homesickblues_]

“No, I’m not okay,"
lolz. He's not okay.

LOL I BET U R.
That's exactly what I would have said.

The last flashback was pretty sad.
But I actually think you should end it at "No, they won't." I think that'd have a more emotional impact, you know.

This was very well-written.
:D

[redpariah]

i read it. you are growing into such a great writer -- reading your writing is effortless, and that's how reading should be. your writing flows like thoughts, which is much more difficult to pull off than it sounds.

KUDOS, WOMAN.