BETA S.O.S.: Cry For Help!

[carolinelamb]

Would someone be so kind and help me with a fic I have written for a fest? It is a bit darkish and contains Harry/Ginny and Harry/Snape! Apart from typos, misplaced commas and dashes, I might also need help with the syntax. If you know me, you know that my sentences are often German-structured which wouldn't be a problem if I were writing them in

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[red_day_dawning]

I'm not the best beta, but I'm here and happy to help if you find no-one better.