Fic: Zeroes and Ones 19/? (Criminal Minds, Morgan/Reid, NC17)

[carolinecrane]

Title: Zeroes and Ones 19

Comments

[goddessdster]

I'm still loving how you're keeping this inside Derek's head as he examines his and Spencer's changing relationship and everything that means. It does kill me a little to wait for each part, but it makes each new post an awesome surprise.

[carolinecrane]

Oh, this fic is so much harder to write than that other nonsense I spew, because the characters are rich and layered and have all this *history* and they're both broken and it's just...yeah. It's a challenge. Plus, I went and put 300 miles between them so I can't just fall back on porn to show what they're not saying. But I'm working on it!

[rabidfan]

::beams::

I love this! I'm going back to re-read what you've got so far.

plus? I love how you write sex without it being smut. Don't get me wrong, I'm a big fan of smut, but real feelings go with real sex...and you write it very well. Also, did you notice that I figured out how to make tinylittletext?? I, I am made of awesome. And full of hot air!

[carolinecrane]

Thanks! I do take pride in my smut-with-feelings.

Congratulations on the tiny text! That's very impressive. Consider me impressed. ;)

[jujuberry136]

I had forgotten that the episode where the team meets Spencer's father happened after 4.01 (obvious when I think about it now). Here's hoping if it does still happen, Derek will be able to help Spencer heal.

But I do love this part for Derek's quiet introspection, Spencer's version of flirting, and the flashes of last night.

[carolinecrane]

The hardest part of this entire stupid verse is remembering what to leave out. If that makes any sense.

Thanks!

[duckduck]

Oh, you know, I loved the slow build-up of this one, but I love the whole after-the-sexy-action bits too. Great job!