Comments | carolinecrane: Fic: Cloud Illusions (CSI, Nick/Greg, PG)

carolinecrane

Fic: Cloud Illusions (CSI, Nick/Greg, PG)

Apr 17, 2009 14:41

Title: Cloud Illusions
Fandom: CSI
Pairing: Nick/Greg (duh)
Rating: PG
Summary: Greg explains the truth about Utopian societies. Part of the Pancakeverse, naturally. Also post-ep for 9x20, so spoilers for last night's episode.
A/N: This is completely self-indulgent, I know. I am totally okay with that.

( Usually Greg's the first one out of bed. )

series: pancake, fic: csi, csi, fic

Comments 12

starmack April 17 2009, 19:49:34 UTC

*sighs* SO delightful, you my dear, are the reason I don't need to watch the episodes. This was completely perfect.

carolinecrane April 18 2009, 02:18:47 UTC

Aw, you are really sweet. Thanks, glad you liked. :)

cinderlily April 17 2009, 20:14:53 UTC

Caroline you are made of awesome. Seriously. This was sweet and adorable and perfectly slid into my brain as what actually happened after that episode. You know my weakness for domestic bliss and Nick and Greg and making out on the couch and Greg making fun of Nick and *sigh*. Perfect.

My favorite bit? and at least these days when Nick plays the hero and gets himself shot at or something, Greg gets to touch to make sure everything's still where it's supposed to be. It is like the entirety of how I see Greg wrapped up in one sentence. How do you DO that?

carolinecrane April 18 2009, 02:17:53 UTC

And you know *my* weakness for Nick and Greg living happily ever after despite the awfulness going on around them, so really, this is never going to get old for me.

How do you DO that?

I don't know! That sentence really fought me, though, so I'm glad it worked for you. Thanks :)

cinderlily April 18 2009, 02:22:56 UTC

I promise to be around for forever to revel in the awesomeness of that as I am totally sure I will never get sick of it either. :) (And I will try to write it as well. :D)

sassygirl April 17 2009, 22:11:24 UTC

making out on the couch is my favourite scenario for anything ever, and this was perfect, with coffee, puppy and hips. You write them so well with their thoughts, feelings and worries. This was fantastic, and I loved Greg's authorspeak.

carolinecrane April 18 2009, 02:16:26 UTC

Making out on the couch is my favorite thing ever too. I'm pretty easy, I admit it. I'm glad you enjoyed; thanks!

writingpathways April 17 2009, 22:28:40 UTC

Hee. Awesome.

carolinecrane April 18 2009, 02:15:39 UTC

Thanks!

jujuberry136 April 18 2009, 02:14:59 UTC

Awww. This is a great tag to the episode! Loved the whole couch scene :D

carolinecrane April 18 2009, 02:19:31 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed :)