Fic: Famous Cliches (CSI, Nick/Greg, PG)

Oct 02, 2004 17:22

Title: Famous Clichés ( Read more... )

fic: csi, series: surfing, csi, fic

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carolinecrane October 2 2004, 19:11:23 UTC
I know, I just wasn't feeling the porn today. You know how you have to be in the mood to write it. But I'm going to finish this damn thing, it's just taking longer than it should.

I swore I was never going to do the dual POV thing again, but since it's a series it's not *really* dual POV. That's what I'm telling myself, anyway.

Thanks.

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cinderlily October 2 2004, 19:07:01 UTC
As always, I loved this. Greg trying to stay mad is cute, and Nick is just all around adorable. The line about staring at the floor as if the carpet had the answers was cute, and something I tend to do. Anyway, to sum it up, I loved this. Mmmmm.

... P0rn in the next chapter? .... I am a whore, arn't I? ;) Kidding, do with it what you will, I like anything and everything you write.

Elizabeth

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carolinecrane October 2 2004, 19:10:10 UTC
Well there was supposed to be porn in this chapter, but I just didn't feel like writing it. So we'll see how I feel the next time, but at this point there are definitely plans for some variety of nakedness.

Nick does that looking down at his feet thing sometimes on the show, so I figured I could just borrow from George ; ) Anyway, thanks, glad you liked.

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sinsense October 2 2004, 20:23:04 UTC
It's better for you not to write the porn if you weren't in the mood -- it comes across to the reader, I think, if you aren't entirely enjoying what you're writing. We all obviously still love it when you don't write porn, so I don't think an apology is necessary. :] Thank you for posting this, as always it was wonderful to read.

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carolinecrane October 2 2004, 21:09:52 UTC
Thanks, I'm very glad you enjoyed it. And you're exactly right, I learned the hard way not to force anything I wasn't feeling a long time ago.

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alethialia October 2 2004, 22:07:57 UTC
Ooh, I liked this. You get a sense of Greg thinking he should resist, but utterly without the strength to do so. Very cool.

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carolinecrane October 3 2004, 08:45:34 UTC
Poor, spineless Greg. He really kind of is, though. Thanks, glad you liked.

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crycrywolf October 2 2004, 23:32:30 UTC
oh I love this! I loved the "No talking about Grissom while you're taking my clothes off, either," for some reason that made me laugh out loud.

this was perfect to come home and read after a hard day at work.

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carolinecrane October 3 2004, 08:45:14 UTC
Heh. Thanks. Glad you liked.

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